Main female role for my oc below

Name : Jennie Tokoyami
age: 15
Quirk : Phoenix , she can shoot fire and her tears heal her allies

Ooh this is getting good

Oooh this is very interesting, I wonder whats gonna happen next chapter!

I thought it was a good chapter, I got a little confused in the action scene with Yogan but I might’ve just been dumb

Name ?
Quirk pull and push:he can pull anything to him and can push anything out of him as well just like Pain in naruto

Kiku raito,Quirk is Strong Leg:he have a strong leg so he mainly use kick and fast make him like sanji onepiece
I think it will be cool hahaha
He can be student or teacher or even pro hero

Name: Takeshi rui
Quirk: Clone: he can make clone of himself but strength is not the same with the main body and if clone get damage he will get damage 10% as well
He should be student

Story is good for having characters in this universe without tying them to the main cast, I approve but my opinion doesn’t matter, only yourself.

Character idea
Omuni Fuzoku
Age 15
Male
Quirk- Fire arms- Arms able to morph into different guns that propels Fire in bullet shape, too much use can lead to over heating and strain in arms.
Suggestion- think military soldier Iida and Bakugo combines personality

Interesting idea you have here, although it might help to edit your story title since it's misspelled. And a word of advice, I would delete the 'sorry for the bad summary' section of your summary because it gives readers the impression that you do not have a solid idea, which isn't true from what I'm reading, so just a heads up. So far your dialogue is pretty good, although I personally think you need to add more description to your scenes. We're lacking a bit of what's going on due to only having dialogue to go off of, but that could also be your personal style, which there isn't anything wrong with but would help the story a lot for you to paint a picture. Anyways, good luck with your fic!