Liv's speech is lovely. Really perfect.

I just started reading this! Great job! I felt like you stayed pretty close to character for them all.

Nice writing! I enjoyed reading this even tho it was a very sad occasion...Thank you for sharing!

Oh Jesus... this was beautiful! You did so good with Olivia’s memoriam. Ugh! I’m sad this is coming to an end.

Adored the interaction between Rafael and Noah

YAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSS! Im so ready for this! A kid’s innocence man, I tell ya! Oh, Im glad you’re back with a new chapter.

I'm really enjoying this story the cliffhangers are just great ,but please don't hurt Liv or lucia.
Barson is meant to be remember that

This is really good.

Oh my heart! You know what, I aint even mad about this, but at the same time, I wish she couldve stuck around for a little bit longer just to see her stubborn ass son finally do something about his love for Olivia. I cant wait to see what comes next!

Great job! Please get them back together. When he left it broke my heart and I'm sure millions of others.

That took a TURN

And I love it.

You have been making my days with these frequent updates!

OH GOD NOOOO! PLEASE REMIND ME TO NEVER IGNORE YOUR NOTES AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER! I almost crashed my car because I wanted to read this whilst driving, just great! Dude... this is so good, you’re so good... this is amazing. I can’t wait for more. Please let Rafael and Lucia be ok, my heart wont be able to handle it if something happens.

It's getting juicier by the minute. Liv just can't help herself tho, can she? Poor Barba!

Oohhh now Liv is all alone! I hope she gets to be the hero she is