Excellent!

To start off, I kind of almost forgot about this story; it's been so long. But glad to see you're back again - hope your staying healthy and safe.
Onto the story proper, I'm intrigued about that book that 'looks similar to the Fade', I wonder about its contents. Also, the familiar faces of Hawke, Carver, Merrill, Fenris &, of course, Zevran are a sight for sore eyes (I look forward to the reunion between Mallorn & Zevran)! But who the heck is Hafren? Another OC? And what's happened to Cu-Sith? Is he still alive in the events of Inquisition?
I can't wait for what you have in store for future chapters; keep up the good work and update soon!

Thanks for the chap!
You don't know how your work help me in these dark times, I just lost my father and I had nothing to busy myself with but this chapter helped me!

Thanks for the chapter! I was waiting for this for soooo long, good idea for Sera and the bookshelves I didn't think of it the first time we saw her son (I already forgot his name... What can I say, I just got up)

Excellent!

Merry Christmas in advance! I hope you will make Thorn confront Solas about the truth

Ok, I do not speak english very well, but I've been reading this since the beginning and I have to say that its been a while since Ive fallen in love with a story. I love the way youre telling it. Despite being a story that we more or less know, you have found a way to give that original twist that generates curiosity. Keep going!

Again, sorry for my bad english.
Have a nice day!

Excellent!

So Corypheus is joined by Calpernia, who leads the Venatori, and we see some Red Templars? Where did said Red Templars come from if the Templars are already recruited? Are the Red Templars some stragglers who got left behind or joined Corypheus willingly?
Also, will there be a part 2 for where Callon faces Corypheus (possibly with Mallorn alongside him?) and the escape from Haven at all?
Other than that, I can't wait for more chapters to come. Keep up the good work!

So, Mallorn has to consider the events in the future, as well as what she saw in the games now? Talk about a mighty headache in the works. Also, I'm curious as to what will happen when Corypheus makes his appearance; now that both Templars AND Mages have been recruited, what forces will Corypheus use to storm Haven; will it only be the Venatori or will there be others alongside them?
Apart from that, I look forward to seeing more interactions between Mallorn and the rest of the characters e.g.
. Dorian (because who doesn't love Dorian? He's awesome! And I get the feeling that both he and Mallorn will get along well and have interesting conversations)
. Solas (because of how their relationship (?) was portrayed in The-Future-To-Avoid-At-All-Cost via the diary/journal, as well as the fact that she's the only one who knows who Solas really is)
. Zevran and Feynren (because 1. I'm eager to see our favourite former Antivan Crow making an appearance, and 2. because I'm starting to become attached to Feynren as a character, and I wouldn't mind seeing more of him with Mallorn).

OMG! Is the only thing I can say for the chapter 11, thanks for the chap! It was the best chap I read until now!

Loving the story so far! I really like the 2 timelines that you have going. It's a difficult way to write a story but you are doing an amazing job at it! Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the chap! For the chantry part I suppose they didn't have the time or will to create special zone for each race... Or it's simply a plot hole lol, or they simply didn't care.

Enjoying your story, can't wait to read more.

Thanks for the chap! Does she have the class obtainable in Ostagar? You know the one with the elve soul in the phylactere which give the Mage the possibility to wear heavy armor shield and sword. (I'm not sure if it's this or if I'm mistaken and it's another thing entirely)