Reviews for flame, in three parts
wrencrank chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Anna, Yoh, Hao! Awesome story. I love Anna's part. And the little thing where Hao says that Anna does understand. It fits with canon too! Yay!
lescribble lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
It's a shame that something as amazing as this is not loved enough in reviews. I'm still blown away by the imagery in this fic- reading it again, after a couple of years.
Kage NoTenshi chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
How is it that you have not written /more/ Shaman King? This is too good!

Some of it is entertaining because it's oh-so-accurate (like Anna no longer hating people, but disliking them for being irredeemably stupid. I laughed out loud at that one.) Some of it's wonderful simply because you know just the right words to choose (Anna's sharp glass edges and eyes the color of tragedy or Hao's lack of edges.) And to top it all off, it's a Hao piece, and I love Hao.

Excellent job!
xenophile chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
the alternating perspectives were well thought out, and the characters portrayed in a commendably accurate light. well written, and deserving more of a response from the readers.
rendezvous chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Stupid title or not (;), I really enjoyed the way this fic was written-three parts, three people, three POVs and all. Touching, really, and character insight is mind-blowing. Esp. liked the way you did Hao-as in, he really isn't /evil/-just misunderstood (sort of). This is a miracle-after an hour (actually, it's more like half an hour) of searching I've finally found a SK fic that's readable! Eh. _~ This is definitely going on my favorites list. Jane, and thanks for the great read!
sepia days chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
I am not sure why this fic has such little reviews. It's so beautifully written and so creative. I love the way you organized this.
what used to be meemee chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
after wandering around the shaman king section for awhile i find this. and i'm /so/ glad i did. the pov is pretty clear, so you shouldn't worry about that! it was beautifully written. i'm serious.
Fushigi Kismet chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Nicely in character, all three of them.

I enjoyed the examination of their disparate worldviews very much. _
SweetG chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
so deep so so *bwua* ( criying as crazy ) cute please i want more write more please please
Sweet Anime Fan chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
Ok, so I'm dense. Despite you saying it should be obvious ... I still couldn't figure it out. -_-;; *sigh* I DID get the last one though. Hao right? ;; Oh well, I still enjoyed the fic even if I didn't know who's POV it was.

"But my cute little brother doesn't understand me, and so he hates me for what I'm doing. My cute little brother's even cuter fiancee /does/ understand-and that's why she hates me even more." - This is my fav line. It's so cute! _