Update PLS

Uhm... So, yeah, hello. Hi, welcome or something else. I am from Russia, sorry for mistakes. For starters - your story is beautiful. There are not many unusual works in Russian fandom, mostly short shots of Starko or yaoi with Tom and Marco. I, as a writer, started recently and am now writing a story with an OC that fell into the body of a male Star, Komet. ..sounds strange, but in Russian fandom there is a separate genre for "moving into someone else's body or dimension." ..I plan to make Eclipse the main female character when she appears, she's a very interesting character and I'm really tired of everyone paying attention only to Marco. But your Marklipsa... Oh, holy Potato ... You have no idea how long I've been looking for this. ..I haven't read to the end, but I can wish you luck with that. I've been creating stories for as long as I can remember and I really like unusual ideas. I hope you don’t leave the Fanfiction! Thanks for your efforts !

I can't stop cringing at this. there is no art to this literature at all. You seem really just throw descriptions and words down. that does not constitute a job well done

pls continue it and wean will there be some hot content in the story ;)

Can you please write more of it i really like that one

I am hooked.
I agree with you on the potential. Personally, I expect the worlds to regress into tribes and have a large, multi-sided war! Would like to read that actually.

I love this pairing. I feel like Marco and Eclipsa's personalities always seemed like they would blend well together. I also love how you explain that Marco is technically a full grown adult mentally. Which when you really think about it, kind of makes it really weird considering he's dating a minor now lol. Very well-written. I can't wait to see what happens if Globgor still gets released. It would also be really nice to see Meteora warm up to Marco a little. I love how the running gag that Princess Turdina is the only thing she remembers from her past life. But idk it would be nice to see him want to protect her like his own daughter or even just a little sister like Mariposa. You could even make a fic after this one where if Marco and Eclipsa get together you could have little One-Shots and a couple could be Marco sharing a moment with Meteora. Idk it's your fic and I love it. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next update.

I love Marco and Eclipsa's dynamic, tho I'm afraid for their future as they'll have to face the truth eventually. So exciting.

It's been a while since the last time I've read a story so wholesome and well written. Therefore I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for your time and your effort.

Esta interesante. Buena historia

It's alive! Always happy to see more, and even more happy that the plot is progressing while Marco and Eclipsa are having their little fun.

Woohooo my favorite svtfoe fic is back! Really liked this little chapter. Not too much relationship progression but a nice little update nonetheless. It’s nice to see the relationship not being rushed. Also yeah I agree that although I didn’t absolutely hate the series finale, I wasn’t a huge fan. Like you said there were a lot of potential that they didn’t capitalize on. Also imo it felt really rushed, especially regarding the relationships. Marco and Kelly get together but within an episode or two they break up offscreen. Tom finds out Star kind of cheated on him at the end of the last season but when he doesn’t make it a big deal and handles it in a pretty mature way, (which imo is pretty good character development) instead of Star being proud of him or guilty for kissing his best friend, she gets mad at him. Then they break up seemingly out of nowhere. Personally I was rooting for Starco since the dead clown seance. I liked Jackie and Jarco, I was admittedly pretty salty when Tom and Star started dating but I still liked Tom and his character development. So even though I was rooting for Starco, I was personally really disappointed when she broke up with Tom. I literally felt nothing and then the joke of him failing to leave afterwards didn’t really land with me. Actually kind of ruined the moment even more. I didn’t even feel anything when Starco became official because even THAT felt rushed. Star literally pulls him aside for a couple minutes during the big finale, they kiss, and then they come back for the rest of the finale. I... felt...nothing. I felt more feels in the Steven Universe Movie when Connie kissed Steven on the cheek lol. Not to mention they teased stuff that got a lot of fans excited but never capitalized on them. Why Marco has cheek marks and can use magic. The revelation that Mewmans are literally humans (Not super surprising but they should have revealed it to the characters). Even destroying the magic. Lol I never wanted that! Even if we never would get to see Star and Marco as king and queen, like I wanted to at the start of the series, I didn’t want them to get rid of magic altogether. That’s like the coolest part of the series. I mean they killed off Hekapoo, and she’s like one of my favorite characters. They killed her off screen and she was just perfectly okay with dying. Heck (no pun intended) I would have felt better if Marco ended up with her in the end or even Janna on Earth while Tom married Star than all this. Even the Mewni monarchy and government just basically being destroyed in the end. Like I get the anti racism plot and choosing your own destiny but what is the message supposed to be by the end of the series. The only way to end racism is to get rid of the government lol? The whole finale and final season in general felt really underwhelming and rushed. I’m really excited to see what you do with it in your version. No matter what it is I won’t really judge as long we get a nice Marclipsa ending lol. Obviously It’s your story in the end. I’m also wondering how Globgor will react if his wife has finally moved on if you have him get freed, or how Marco will react if he’s rejected again if she wants to put her family back together again and continue her marriage. Oh man maybe she’ll have to struggle on whether or not to free him if she finds out she can after catching feelings for Karate kid. Love your story and glad that your back.

Ah this was cute and has some bits of foreshadowing that will come to bite sooner then we hope...

Can’t wait to see more and please tell me that Marco kicks Mina’s ass! That would be so cool to see, especially if he has the wand, I’d love to see her expression if Marco ever used the wand in front of her!

Ahh it’s so delightful to finally find a fic like this, I haven’t been able to find one with any sort of length before. So please continue until the end!

I'm actually really glad this is back. I rather enjoy the stranger ships like this and its always nice to see a good story around them. Welcome back and good luck.