Awesome

so, not Naruto really, an oc named Naruto, surrounded by various other oc's who bear Naruto-verse names, but otherwise have nothing to do with Naruto. Pass. False advertising as a Naruto crossover.

Can’t wait for another chapter! This story is good

Haven’t even read the story yet, just the summary and it already sound live as shit

Too much Pirates of the Caribbean references and bad pirate accent.

Next

Can't wait to see where this goes. Wonder how Asami will take another woman being with here fiance. I'll be it will be explosive at best.

nice chapter. cant wait for more. though I do have a question, did u quit the Sound Of Shaking and Reading sound of Shaking? those stories got me to read ur work. Never found anything about them, except that one chapter of ur collection.

Well, thankfully her attitude did improve slightly. A plus. Unfortunately Naruto remains largely the same. He is very similar to the attention starved original version, which is odd considering he grew up loved, and with good friends/family.
Also, Boa’s interest in him feels even more forced than the anime/manga did for her and Luffy.
All in all, I’m gonna call it quits here. I wish ya luck with the rest of the fic.

Noooooooo! He’s a simp! She tried to steal all his stuff, disrespected him and his entire crew, and he apologized for calling her names?! Yikes. The only redeeming thing is she’s towing them to Amazon Lily. Even then she’s incredibly nosy, while offering nothing about herself. Seriously, this isn’t the kind of behavior one would call acceptable between two captains. Especially since her devil fruit has already proven useless against him.
I do hope her attitude improves, or he stops taking shit from her. Can’t have him bending over backwards for every female he comes across.

Awesome chapter keep it up

What a shit story. Your overpowering him by giving him all those devil fruits.

so damn good

does not whitebeard have umi-umi no mi devil fruit?

Hope there will be a lemon between Naruto and Asami. I think you’re giving Naruto too many devil fruits other than that I’m looking forward to read more of this story