I have to sat that this was very good. Now, unless I was reciting it wrong, the rythm seemd a bit off in somplaces.

Ha ha! That was cool! Great job!

Hehe! this fic was very cute! Loved the part where Aeris asked why no-one checked for a pulse.. hehe! Great! Buy why Christmas in the middle of spring? Hm. oh well whatever floats your boat, right! hehe, HAHA! Keep writing!

I summoned the strength to log in! _ Well, I had to, I wanted to say that this was frickin' funny!

"Please help me down, for the floor I can't reach!"

That is classic. You should do another version of 'Twas the night before Christmas' but with the Turks. (it's just a sugestion but I would love to see one.) _