Can I just say that I am SO impressed with this story - would love to know more! Like, the quality of both action and dialogue is fantastic, and the character development as well...I came for the Queliot but I LOVE what you've done with Kady, and Ruth is the best! Thank you for your amazing work.

great story, thanks ;)
can't wait for more ;)
please please more ;)
will there be an m-preg?

Really, I don't have the faintest idea what the fuck is going on or what I'm currently reading anymore. I sounds llike you fusionned two completely different fics, I thought it would just end as a sweet reunion of Quentin with the crew but all that mess waste it and I'm confused when did Margo leave Fillory where are Josh and Fen and Penny23, why Whitespire was in ruin, the thousand of people who died was it on Fillory or on Earth, why Chaos needed to be hide under the ocean, what it the point of the Library and the book replacement/dogma thing (what does it change to have several books of many realities instead of only one ?), what is this goddamn war are you saying to me the Library uses schrapnel on magicians wth, etc etc... T.T the pace is crazy, you use Craig as a deus ex machina joker, I don't understand shit
Margo speech was moving tho

wow I wonder how and when we jumped from "You can't bring back Q from the dead Eliot you need to move on !" to "hooray you succeed nobody gives a shit shut up now all of this was part of the huge plan in a magical world war" o.o

I love. So. Much. "Man of action Eliot".

Oh god, Craig is such a sweet man! Such a genuinely GOOD person.

It is so lovely to find an actually good Magicians fic on this site. I’m really enjoying this so far.

Some beauty I loves this so hard

Glorious!

I love this. I love you. So. Much.

YAY Q IS BACK! WTF is going on w/ the Library & Underworld, though?

Yassssssss. Love how involved Craig has become. Having the non-magical person def gives Eliot a unique advantage. Using the bunnies to Travel? Genius idea! :O Love it. Musical episode better get here fast!

Excellent! Craig coming in clutch! lol I loved your iteration of Penny - very in-character & yet also showing some new qualities that show his growth. Really liking the whole magic war going on in the background. Hopefully Eliot can get his resurrection plan back on track soon. Looking forward to more!

yay chapter 6! I was not expecting this monkey-wrench! cant wait to see how El gets out, and what the long-term consequences will be. also, next chapter will be a musical episode?! love it.

So, Craig is precious. I do hope he reappears at some point. I cannot wait to see what comes next and what spell you've devised for Eliot to try. More, soon, darling! I'll be waiting. (Aaaaaaaaaaaand I sound like a stalker now, so there's that.)