Hi there, I thought of something else I wanted to add to my previous suggestions. I think seeing Lou's thought process more would be good, as well as seeing some couple type moments between Lou and Mitch, or flashbacks of their relationship moments so we can learn more about them and how they are/came to be in the context of your amazing story. I think you are doing an absolutely amazing job, and I hope to see an update from you soon! :) I hope these comments come off in the way I mean them, I don't want to be pushy, just wanted to give you some opinions from this reader's perspective and I hope they help you find direction if you've happened to lose it

Hi there, I hope you are well. I just wanted to say I love your writing, especially those mother daughter heart-wrenching (and heart-swelling) moments between Georgie and Lou! Although I definitely want Katy to stay in the picture, as obviously they won't get over her loss ever, but I think diving into some other more future based story lines could be a good idea, while obviously keeping Katy part of the discussion. Something like Georgie and Wyatt moments, maybe her dealing with some typical teen drama in the midst of all her chaos and guilt, and her mom starting to gain her bearings again and help her through that, thus helping her focus on what she does have and maybe start the long process of healing. Moments where they think of Katy and can be happy, as even though those are so few and far and between in the beginning, they are important (in my experience) for keeping going throughout the day.

Please update soon, love this story and your writing!

Awe...now this was the chapter I have been waiting for. Lou is getting stronger and her and Georgie have had that conversation/connection/understanding moment that they needed to try and move on. Of course, I am sure that more drama and ups and downs are still to come, but this was a nice break and something I think was needed. thanks for the quick update.

I can't believe that the family wouldn't let Lou go to the funeral or make plans for it. As hard as it would have been, she needed that to try to heal and Georgie fighting with her from time to time. What is going on with her? Is Lou sicker then just grief? Something is just not right between them or with themselves either. Maybe, Quinn can get to the bottom of things. That family needs help. LOVED the convo between Jack and Lou, always a good thing when Jack and Amy interact with her and the family. Keep up the good work

Oh my freaking god THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Keep up the fantastic work heartlandwriters !

Loved this chapter. Who’s Quinn?

Why haven't we founded out out how kitty died in the car wirck what is George hiding from everyone

That was such a beautiful Chapter. Brilliant.

I've only read a couple of chapters of your stories but I must say that I do enjoy this story immensely! I mightn't always drop a review but I really hope you continue!

Georgie needs to till what couse the wrick becouse it like she hiding something from tham and I bet Amy and jack will find out what George do to couse the wrick hope they turn the backs on her she done something that she don't want Lou to find out aboute it she killed her setter and acts like she done nothing roung just the George everyone knows the trouble Maker she is

I ship Peter and Lou 3333

Hi guys,

I understand that this may not be the most interesting story, and not the most exciting. But it feels like crap not having any interaction from the readers. I mean, even if you hate a chapter, just say it! I need something to go off of. It feels like I'm posting for nobody at times. I am sure that if this story was about Ty and Amy, the reviews would come in very quickly. But I can't write about those characters - I don't understand them, and I certainly wouldn't be able to write them the way I am writing my favs. I really want to continue with this story, but I don't think anyone wants me to xD

Before the cause of the accident was revealed, that's all some people wanted to know. But I refrained from explaining it, because that wasn't the point of the story. Now that it's been revealed...the review section is empty. I want to let it be known that I am actively working on the story, and adding onto the outline and bla bla bla, but I am thinking of taking down the story because I am just feeling like nobody cares about where it is going, or what journeys the characters are headed on. Sorry for venting, but I feel like I had to put this out here.

Loved this chapter! Hope Lou will be okay!

Why haven't you you told what couse the wrick in the frost place and how Katie die and Georgie didn't get hurt at all were 12 ch in and still don't now how the wrick happen what is geogrei hidding from everyone about the day Katie die she not tell the truth about it would be nice to now but love the story