Reviews for Ice cold deception
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 8 . 2/5
I know it’s not our joe but still shedding tears

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
Miki chapter 19 . 12/28/2019
This was great. I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on it, just thought I'd read the first chapter and see how things went. I couldn't stop reading.
The plot was well thought out and developed, and had a good balance between the current and future parts. I liked how you included Ralph's role into Nora's discovery and rationalizing what Iris did to Caitlin. Bringing the characters back to their base roots helps grounds the characters and increases my believability in a story.
I agree that Iris probably wouldn't have poisoned Caitlin but like you said, she has proven herself to be selfish and thoughtless toward others to get what she wants. And you needed an unforgivable act to push the story along.
One thing I am a bit disappointed by is when Barry is coming to terms with killing Thawne, no one points out that there is a difference between murder and protecting one's family. Argue the point but I think it would have at least helped him come to peace with it easier.
I noticed the Smallville quote! And I loved that you included it.
Overall, fantastic story.
supercode chapter 19 . 6/16/2019
Great story! Honestly? I wish you would have kept the "vibe" of Caitlin giving birth to "new Allison " though, and had that be an additional reason for Barry to divorce Iris, and pursue Caitlin. Otherwise, I personally feel that it looks like Barry gave up on his marriage just because his wife *might* completely lose it and become a homicidal maniac one day, and he just realized he had feelings for someone else.

Still, the hope of having a version of Allison be born one day does make Barry and Caitlin's decisions here understandable. It just felt like more time should have past before such big decisions were made. I feel a few more chapter, or a large time skip, might have helped.

Still, I really enjoyed this story!
Green Hal37 chapter 19 . 6/11/2019
‘Run dad, run‘ Allison. That was so touching.

The final fight in chapter 17 was alright. Nothing major to criticize about.

Hope you never stop writing more Flash stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
Hi! Im just here to say that this was really good and i hope you can do more like this in the future. You have inspired me to write more and im so grateful. Thankyou. By the way you can call me NicolePineaple instead of guest. This story was incredible.
hunter.guiles.9 chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
I ended up seeing Nora like ended up Peter Parker'd infinity war style. I feel sorry for her because she was infected by Iris and got the Thawne Allen treatment. But she was still a spoiled egg. So teamAllisonDawn. Lol. Glad to see a positive end to the depression of the destruction of the future. Lisa's back that's good. GoldenVibe there! Mick's the sole survivor of the first Rogues story wise. So it's great to see Lisa back into the Flash. I like Ralph being said as a detective by Sherloque. Felt like he was knighted to what he deserves. Pretty much way better version of the Cicadia Running Away Season 5. Can't wait to see more versions of your Stories!
Michael Weyer chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
Good work and great wrap-up to it all.
Samantha chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
I liked a lot about this story. Some parts made me kind of sad, like I can't help but a feel a little bad for Nora. But more stories like this are very welcome.
PureAngelBloodedWriter chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
Sad this story is over but love the ending , this was definitely one of my favorite flash stories I hope you write more Snowbarry stories.
Thank you for writing such an amazing writer.
I know this is a story I'll go back and read multiple times.
Aragorn II Elessar chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
Very nice ending.

Iris is gone.

Barry and Caitlin are together finally.

Cisco meets Lisa again. Funny.

Sherloque is gone and yeah, Ralph is a master detective too.

Nice change in the future with everyone stopping the crisis.

Great ending to a great story.
GIJose chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
Fantastic chapter to end your story, liked how Cisco doesn't need to use his powers to tell everything will be good in the future as well as bringing in Lisa to set up the two together. Loved how you bring in Barry and Caitlin together to show that they can still have a future together on how they can't be themselves without the other like two sides of a coin. Finally liked how you concluded it with the news report on how crisis is dealt with. Thanks for finishing this story, it's one to remember. Can't wait to read your other stories especially Crisis on Two Earths, Oliver Queen: Agent of SHIELD, The War on Freedom, Barry Allen Reborn and the sequel to An Impusive Decison as those are my personal favourites. Again great work!
Jokermask18 chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
Excellent ending:}
justread14 chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
Awesome!... Thank you for this it was GREAT! better than the show lol..ehh I'm bias :D. Now i can go back and read it without sitting on the edge waiting for the next chapter xD
njl007 chapter 19 . 6/10/2019
good story what happens next?
ChlexLover3 chapter 18 . 6/10/2019
This had me in tears...so sad to see it end with only one chapter left! (Slowly dying on the inside)
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