Awesome

While this story is certainly well-written from a technical perspective, as expected after reading The Bloody Ashikabi, I can only give this story a Follow, but not a Favourite, for several reason:
- Since Minato is the MC in this story, he should obviously take centre stage. Instead, he's reduced to playing a mentor or sorts for Ichigo and co. and doing the legwork that allow for Ichigo to come in and "save" the day.
- The unearned humility on Minato's part becomes extremely annoying even after just the first time it happens. No normal person can single-handedly change the courses of multiple history-defining events. It's fine not to aggressively take advantage of the favours that he's surely owned, but to severely downplay them as anything close to normal is unacceptable.
- Yoruichi (and perhaps Kukaku) could've easily be written into the Minato's collective, but you wastes such a good character on an ambiguous one night stand.
- And speaking of the collective, I can't believe there isn't at least a lime scene in this story.
- This point isn't a criticism of the story in itself, but rather its formatting. The story could've been separated into two or three chapters instead of dropped as one massive 41k word length bomb.

Geez that's alot I read for 1 chap

And normality returns.
I'm quite impressed that you have done pretty much all of Bleach in 1 chapter without it really feeling like a drag.

We are talking about the guy who created the words extrovert and introvert, with Ichigo's family profession it makes a lot of sense that he would know about it.

Good story but I always feel uncomfortable about the whole sex thing. I know this is M rated as well as Persona 3 itself, but knowing Minato, he would've never done such thing as sex at his own will. Well at least you really did a good job for Minato's personality.

Good story, must have taken you ages to write, it took me all day to read. Hope you update soon

I only figure this out now because I’m playing FGO but is your Profile pic Edmond Dantes

Minato’s missing out if he doesn’t get Franceska Mila Rose...

People in the comments "Divide this into multiple chapters." Why? 40k literally amounts to multiple chapters anyway. So what if is out out as a one shot it would look the same unless the author wrote more for it.

Hell I'm glad it had a beginning and an actual ending.

my critics in this, only about the harem thing.
No, I'm not about to curse or belittle you or anything, because my dislike is entirely on me.
I can... at least ignored the harem because you explained it in narrative, and honestly in persona canon you can date all so, yeah. It's the consent thing.
this is good.

This was great, though feels a bit rushed due to being a 'one-shot'. I would love to see this split into chapters and expanded. Slowed down a bit. Maybe a prologue chapter that showed some years in the future how everything is working out and all for everyone.

This was a great story it was true to both main characters and I enjoyed how Minato helped Ichigo mature while not ruining their respective characters. This was one of the best crossovers I've read too many favour one main over the other hope to read more from you.

It is good to see you writing again. I love your story's. Keep up the good work.

oooh man beautiful great sorry I can't do constructive criticism

This is something I didn't know I wanted but now I wonder why it hasn't been done before. Congratulations on the great story.