this base off of batman under the red hood

Ok, I'm gonna be for real with you about this one.
-The fight scene, very good. VERY, very good.
-The buildup of the story itself, again, very good.
-But the execution...Sorry, but no.

Ayane fought against Kasumi to have Kasuimi's heart to be hardened, and to kill in order to save lives, but then when Kasumi is given the choice to end Christie, with all the right reasons to do so, you have her to stick to her morals, and even change Ayane's mind entirely of the whole scene, and made Ayane spare Christie, and follow what Kasumi wants, to spare christie. I was expecting for Kasumi to actually kill Christie, and for this to have a dark ending, not make this yet ANOTHER happy ending like you ALL your stories. -_-

We clearly see that Kasumi does have the will to kill. We seen it in NG3 RE, so why not here? Ayane's got the right intentions to kill those who are evil, so that their tyranny will be put to an end now, and forever, but Kasumi...

Sorry dude, but after the execution of this whole scene, No. 3/10.

Well, well, Li'l Lily~

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches~!

You have nothing to be sorry for, Yuri-chan! :3 Seriously~! Hell, if anything, Kasumi is better than Batman! Oh yeah, I said it~! :D Kasumi is way~prettier, for one~ LOL

So, my goodness~ Oh my goodness~ *O* Kasumi, Ayane's beloved Onee-chan, and Ayane herself duking it out for the right to decide what to do with Christie and blood-soaked business. My goodness...this story was very emotionally-charged with a very, oh so very satisfying conclusion and~as always, per the Yuri-chan usual, absolutely wonderful, badass battle choreography~!

Haaah, Ayane just wanted to keep her Onee-chan safe~ *O* She's so sweet, if not a little...y'know, heh, extreme or harsh with her methods. LOL My goodness~

Christie...oh the trouble she causes, huh? LOL

Great work, Yuri-chan~!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!