You better keep going

great story, I really like the idea. can't wait for the net chapter.

That not so subtle foreshadowing. I also have the advantage of FORESIGHT, but I'll admit it slipped the first time I read it, I think

Please keep up the good work because I am really starting to enjoy this piece of literature.

why the fuck is he playing along with this bullshit

huh as if your sucky english wasnt bad enough you start switching povs without any notice.
plot is alright though

kind of stupid telling them their failings, all this does is give them the opportunity to rectify it, then the OC looks stupid.

Excellent story. The ay you incorporate his foreknowledge is excellent. It isn’t too correct and changes with each decision Carter makes is very well executed. “Small changes to large events, big changes to small events.” A great way to incorporate a new character into a story. The chapters are long and engaging, and you incorporated his advanced tech knowledge beautifully. Excellent story, keep up the good work.

A prediction from me:

Someone is going to RIP and TEAR, until it is done.

I dare say that trash pretending as a king attack the village? There's only one answer to this thing "KILL THEM ALL!"

Cliffhanger! You evil!

Awesome update. Looking forward to reading more.

I heard Battlefield 1 trailer music play in my head at the end of the chapter

It's time for war! Also, you have no idea how long i'll wait for an update. I once waited over a year, you an't getting rid of me that easy.

Riyute General or a higher up: DIE WAFFEN LEGT AN!
*HELL MARCH STARTS PLAYING*