this is really good

More! plsI love this so much!

Why did you stop. I really liked this story and it seemed like it was going somewhere good?

I like it

Hope you update soon :)

This is good and is also being cheesy, don't care just thought you should know

Very nice please update again soon

Definitely a lot better rewritten, the fight scene could have used a bit more detail, but it was pretty solid. The fire thing is definitely unique, but I'm not sure about him being able to fly, but that's definitely your choice as an author so don't listen to some random guy like me.

Hi, the story is incredible, but note that you confused the names of tchalla and tchaka
tchalla is the current black panther and tchaka was his father

In order for Percy to not be blamed because he was taking a nap, you could have said he slept for 48 hours or something (Which is basically impossible) because Kronos held him up, that way no blame falls on him.

I like it! Please continue

my only suggestion is that in the upcoming action show the skills Percy has learned in the past year as he obviously has learned a great deal. Depending on how you wish to portray him, feel free to add points where he has weakness or lack of some skills. show that furry has found him to be incredibly useful to shield but he isn't perfect. If the story allows him to be flawed don't shy away from it but don't make it 1 massive weakness, but a few smaller things that come up and Percy realizes he still needs to perfect some skills in a understanding, or frustrated manner. If he isn't perfect OP character in your story then play with different ideas on how he still needs to practice on things and reacts to a failure. Say he is in a fight with Bucky and nearly has him but he is able to break out of Percy's grappling hold, have him when sparring or what not practicing that hold improving it. make errors mean something to the characters beyond just the progression of the story, but the character development. But keep in mind to always expand on the characters actions don't have it bland cause and affect cycle of, charter x failed at action y so character x practiced action y and then later used action y and succeed. Keep the actions diverse enough to keep interest and enough to be remembered and recognised by the readers. and when new things are introduced feel free to expand on what it looks like a bit so we the reader if aren't knowledgeable of it can picture it but you don't need to expand on it too much or everytime which can over saturate a page with too much detail. (I'm just thinking of any advice I can share, I loved the chapter and I want to see who your growing skill at writing develop and help you with it. as well see this story progress!)

This is confusing me... Percy introduced that he had powers... Then fury said what help he would be if he didn't have any powers... Then Percy suddenly has powers again... But he can still get beat up by Russians?

Seen 3 updates today but the chapter isnt there

Nice.