Please learn basic grammar- like capitalization and punctuation rules.

You really need to work on the names in the story. Stop with the yourichi thing if she's no wear around. Looks like your just copying and pasting it together, lazy ass way to do it, especially if you don't change the names. It's getting monotanas at this point. Other than that keep it up.

You know Tatsuki loves him with all her heart and he does to. She defiantly wants him to impregnate her. With all her love for him, the note probably won't be necessary and the power voided lol. And she remembers everything that they did and happy about the fact lol. But one consinstancy issue is you said that she had pants on when you said she wore a nice dress for him. Don't change facts like that around without telling anybody she magicly changed clothes. Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. It's a little confusing at times and hard to follow. Especially during the sex part, first it seems like they just do it with him sticking it in, then latter it's just foreplay, them acual penetration. And let's not forget the discrepancy on the love note thing, he never used it for her that I could tell which goes against the notes rules as it where since he never used it on her. Overall it seems rushed. Just had to say it lol.

Yup he's gonna bone her for sure, adding her to his harem of girls lol.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Just copy paste then really?

Dude this is a mess

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. You know his mom wants some more, as well as getting his sisters in on the act as well lol. His girls all want him over and over lol. You know they all want him to impregnate them because he's so good lol

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Gotta get all the family together indeed. You know the mom would love to get knocked up and probaly his sisters as well from him. You know they probably get it on with each other too lol. Big family in the near future for him at this rate. Does Isane have a harem plan in the works for ichigo as well with all the swa lol.

Yup he's gaining his harem, that chapter was pretty much the same thing over and over again. You know his girls all want him to impregnate them lol.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. You know she will be back wanting wanting more. His girls all want him to impregnate them lol.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. You know she wants his baby just like the rest of his harem lol.

Your best story so far I have seen a marked improvement in this one great job waiting to see more. And more girls too

Wonder if threesomes and orgys are within the power of the note lol. Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Ichigo's gonna have a big harem/family in the near future lol. Wonder if his old man knows about his little sex romps and in a way torturing him bout grandkids lol. You know tatsuki wants a price of ichigo cum creampie in her pussy as well as orihime for that matter lol.