| Reviews for Attack on Titan: Lightning Burst |
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MyStomachHurts chapter 5 . 7/15 You make Eren out to be so strong with his superior powers but he couldn’t even beat Annie in a battle of strength, what the hell |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8 This chapter is really good and I hope you get better from your headache |
X chapter 5 . 7/4 I think it's kinda lame that Eren can't beat Mikasa despite his great advantage, but other than that good job. |
kynan99 chapter 1 . 7/3 Thanks for the awesome chapter. |
Angryhenry chapter 5 . 7/2 Awesome! |
A Simple Library chapter 5 . 7/2 Hmm... interesting. Also, Annie is so cute! Best character in AOT, not gonna lie. |
American Theorist Bros chapter 5 . 7/2 I mean, the thing is, you treat the readers like they don't know the series that you are writing about. You go into depth explaining everything off the bat, when that drags the narrative you want to tell. Yes, we know Annie, Renier, and Bertholdt are the heights they are at. Yes, we know that Eren is strong. If you cut down the explainations, and replaced it with thinking, it would fit the narrative you are trying to write. |
deoxeyses chapter 4 . 5/21 Nice |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17 Update please ! |
Bigcumdaddy4inch chapter 4 . 5/16 Dude plz continueeeee |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/10 I really hope you will continue with this story ! |
WeberCode chapter 4 . 4/18 Hey! Next Chapter! |
KousukeAizen chapter 2 . 3/8 if you can add hange, this couple is lacking |
Thanos69 chapter 3 . 2/11 Good I thought I'm the only one who doesn't like Naruto. |
X chapter 4 . 1/16 I'm just going to make this simple, HOLY SHIT ! |