This got trippy fast. Still, another keeper.

I find that the introduction of Fate totally distorts Akame ga kill universe

challenge, crossover Naruto x Akame Ga Kill only, Tatsumi x harem. not Fate, Not ocs unless they serve the plot

what do you think?

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This became such crap like I usually keep an open mind but this is just ughh not for me I still finished though gotta respect the story but adding all that minato garbage and nox and other crap is so bad lol

Can't wait for the next update

You're using Nasuverse rules right? If that's the case I'm just going to assume that you know that you already know that two of the three "Parts" of Naruto can't survive as their own separate entities for very long. The "Mind" and "Body" start to deteriorate without the "Soul" and while it was never stated exactly how long this takes its very clearly not a long time.

Also I hope that Nox isn't a Yhwach type villain. By this I mean that I hope he isn't one of those villains who is so ridiculously powerful where a Deus Ex Machina is legitimately required to defeat, but considering his feats so far it seems like that might eventually be the case.

Definitely didn't see the Nox twist coming! Looking forward to more.

A lot of the criticism in the reviews here is just baseless as hell or downright dishonest. From the moment they are introduced Nox & Mito are established as Naruto's greatest threats. Their original plan to rewrite reality by attaining godly power is also continually explained and expanded upon throughout the story. Their victory is not a Deus Ex Machina as some have lazily claimed.

Again, they were clearly established as a threat and their plan was explained in detail. They were never even remotely close to losing either. This would only be a Deus Ex Machina if neither their superior strength nor their plan was revealed beforehand and they simply won — which is just not the case.

Then you have people like Thor94 who want Naruto to suddenly come back and become a Mary Sue who is perfect at everything. Yeah just no. The whole point of the current story arc is to demonstrate that Naruto was a flawed character and that he has much to learn before he can best Nox. This isn't your personal Power Fantasy my dude.

Many others who I won't even bother naming leave baseless criticisms like "the story is bad because Naruto died/lost" or "The story is bad because the villains won". Which is just untrue. The quality of the story is determined by how well it's written, how well it develops its themes, characters, and plot – among other aspects that merit objective analysis. Just because the story took a darker direction that you would not have taken or subjectively don't like doesn't mean it's bad.

Plus it's abundantly obvious that the story is building up to Naruto's return towards the end of season 2 — which makes the aforementioned criticisms look even more flawed.

To conclude, I'm not saying this story is perfect by any means. There are many aspects worth criticism. For example, the harem itself is massively overloaded with pointless additions and outside of a few key characters like Gilgamesh, Esdeath, Leone, and Mine most don't get any screen time, development, or even a reason to be there. But overall I just wanted to address the bad, basic, and useless reviews left by most other people here.

Don't let these people discourage you, author/writer. You have been doing a good job giving this story a better direction and expanding on the established lore. Keep it up!

What a twist!

I think I'm lost where has Naruto gone...

this is the most confusing story I have ever read ever

I admit this is a great story. However I found myself in a situation about the plot that sometimes happen to me. I lost interest in the story. As I mentioned I like how you write the story its great but the twist in the story, Narutos enemies turning into gods i dont like that that is my otaku side. The reader side of me like the story but ... Yeah i just lost interest but great work more good fanfics to come.

how about finally publishing your Naruto x Batman Beyond Story like you planned, and while you're at it, maybe you should check the story challenges I have for you in my Bio.

Put akame and kurome in naruto harem

Naruto x akame put it in mind