| Reviews for Middle-Earth the Gamer |
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  ImperialSky chapter 1 . 6/24 Pacing is too fast, it makes everything unbelievable. Why doesn't Harry question that a name is sitting atop Legolas' head? And what is this weird characterization of both Harry and Legolas? I get that this is clearly a romance story between the two of them, but develop their relationship first. A man kissing someone's hand is weird, and that's an understatement. I suggest you revise the entire thing. |
 twilightserius chapter 13 . 6/24 Spill Snape spill. Have a roast of dumbledick. |
| Porschia Johnson chapter 14 . 6/19 your book is so good. please keep updating. |
| Alphaandomega1997Hardcore chapter 13 . 6/19 Can I ask why chapter 12 and chapter 13 Are the same? |
| twilightserius chapter 12 . 6/16 I kinda figure dumbles is a peeping perv if he let all that bad shit happen in a school he controls an has spies everywhere via the pictures don't you? |
| Genuka chapter 12 . 6/16 Happy and learning, the perfect combination! |
| My eyes hurt chapter 1 . 5/2 I have nothing good to say about this. Legolas treats Harry like a lady, children aren't scared of a clear outsider, said children weren't being watched by an adult, Harry didn't freak out and instead immediately assumes that he is in a book, (with the only confirmation being Legolas' name above his head.) Not freaking out at THE WORDS FLOATING ABOVE LEGOLAS' HEAD. No elves noticed him appearing in their home of all places, and Harry is a terrible liar, he lies to an elven Lord who has had centuries to learn to read body language and cues. Overall? 1/10 and you only get the one because of your legible English, as terrible as it is. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/2 The strange new power to swallow the gravy? |
| Genuka chapter 10 . 12/5/2019 At least he is getting proper treatment... |
| LeaPereira chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 Hi ! your story is too good, a very good story. I'd like to know if you're okay with me translating your story into French and posting it on my wattpad account or . See you soon I hope. |
| Mirai HitsugayaKurosaki chapter 10 . 8/4/2019 Wow! Can't wait to read more of ur story! |
| animeromance1972 chapter 10 . 7/30/2019 Will Harry become an elf? |
| MaVennan chapter 10 . 7/29/2019 three chapters I read instead of sleeping yay |
| nevercommentingagain chapter 10 . 7/29/2019 Wonderful chapters. I really look forward to updates on this story. Do you have suggestions on other HP gamer stories, this is my first gamer story? |
| nevercommentingagain chapter 7 . 7/14/2019 I don't think I have ever read a gamer story before but, I like this so far and look forward to reading more of this story. Kudos! |
