| Reviews for Sea of Despair |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2019 It was so sad I couldn't read the first chapter! |
 child-of-artimis chapter 5 . 6/30/2019 Artimis |
| Mr.Salvos chapter 4 . 6/29/2019 yeet you now got 13 reviews including this one beach |
| Mr.Salvos chapter 2 . 6/29/2019 you should've broken up the first big ass paragraph little hard to pay attention to it |
| Mr.Salvos chapter 1 . 6/29/2019 Ima critique every chapter make this one longer adding in more detailed and more |
| child-of-artimis chapter 1 . 5/29/2019 Love it |
| child-of-artimis chapter 1 . 5/29/2019 Please post |
| child-of-artimis chapter 2 . 5/29/2019 Good story |
| child-of-artimis chapter 2 . 5/29/2019 Post please |
| child-of-artimis chapter 3 . 5/29/2019 Great |
| child-of-artimis chapter 3 . 5/29/2019 Good |
| Ultraodan chapter 3 . 5/8/2019 I think is's great. I just want you to update soon. |
| ArkhamKnight310 chapter 3 . 5/7/2019 Your story has potential. As someone else stated just be sure it doesn’t become cliche. I swear if order is the bad guy I’m gonna... No but seriously if you HAVE to put order just make it your own alright? Pertemis is a risky pairing simply because it’s hard to start it in a satisfying and believable way. Even the best I have read so far have all failed. If I had to make one recommendation it would be longer chapters but you do you. Seriously hopeful for this tho it’s a promising start. I see this if your first story btw and from one new writer to another (I haven’t posted my story yet) good luck! |
| SonOfHades1 chapter 3 . 5/7/2019 Well I think the story has potential. There isnt alot of fanfics tht I read with percy being a god of earth. Just try to be unique and not cliche about the plot. |
| TidalMoon2003 chapter 2 . 5/4/2019 My account is down for a day so I'll just review like this. Btw I forgot to update the first paragraph and forgot to divide it. |
