I really loved this chapter. They way you write her relationship with the Clones is really sweet.

I love your additions to this! Superbly capturing the fluctuating emotions felt by the troopers, excellent job!

Do for Ahsoka and her legion please!

Nice series of vignettes! I’m following to see what else happens, and to see if you will spin these into a larger story that focuses on the next few years after Order 66.

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Ohmygosh, this is so good! :O

I love the way you write Bly. You captured his horror at Order 66, his grief over what they've done, his love for his General. You got all of that down, all of what he's feeling and still conveyed that he's forcing himself to be distant from it because /someone/ has to do something - has to try and fix this awful, awful mess. He's a complete wreck inside but he's still standing tall for his brothers, for his General.

It is absolutely not a let down! I enjoyed reading this very much and thank you for sharing it. 3