your writing is literally art

I'm just imagining Danny in a cloak and how adorable it would be.

The part about Penelope's son and how she died broke my heart. I loved Walker assuring her that she's a good mama and he won't let Plasmius take Danny. But I'm also torn because Jazz deserves to see her baby brother!

I really hope you break everyone's expectations and have Vlad just calmly have a conversation with Warden. Maybe have Vlad talk to Dammy for a bit, and have him go on his way

"be Vlad, your going to have to change the AI in your basement because the girl she was made after is evil"

I hope Vlad doesnt go full dumb

I felt absolutely immersed into this new chapter. Everything about it felt as uniquely dramatic as possible.

Ok fue un capítulo no tan cargado de angustia... Pero si reveló varias cosas... El pasado de Penélope, el dolor de Yougerblood, la irá de Walker... Y parece que un poco más y Walker pudo haber besado a Spectra...
Ahora toca ver cómo reaccionaran plasmius y sobre todo Danny y Jazmín...
O cierto... Dato curioso... Creo que el psiquiatra que está ayudando a Jaz es el hijo de Spectra que seguramente sobrevivió al accidente y eligió su carrera para estar más cerca a la memoria de su mamá que dio su vida para salvar la de el... sería un punto muy, pero muy importante al saber que Bertrán manipuló la angustia de Penélope por saber si su hijo sobrevivió... Y tendría sentido por el cual ella se tenga que alimentar de la angustia para dejar miedo y dolor del cual Bertrán se alimenta... Pues creo que se ha dicho que los fantasmas se generan por sus asuntos inconclusos o pesares por lo cual irónicamente se alimentan del mismo sentimiento que los aqueja para seguir existiendo... y si llegan a saber la verdad solamente se alimentaran del sentimiento contrario... Volviéndose ángeles figurativamente pues buscarán proteger y cuidar...

I love how you're building up the meeting of the two sides, I can't wait for it to happen! (take all the time you need time though)

Here's a cookie for your soul, also I feel pretty bad for Jazz she just wants her brother back.

I am so helping them beat vlad, love how you made her a good mom

Holy shit. That's one way to start a story... I don't know what's worse: 4-year-old Danny being vivisected by his parents presumably because he couldn't leave ghost form, or the fact that I can totally see his parents doing that canonically. I mean they weaponized a potato peeler that peels off a ghost's layers one by one, that's gotta classify as torture somewhere... really interesting so far, I'm glad to have found this story.

Awww they are such a adorable family, vlad is seriously going to be an even looper fruitloop, love the story, broke my heart, and right after make me cry from laughing.

Thanks for the update! I loved seeing Danny's pov again and that he's slowly healing. The dreams with him talking to Nocturne was interesting. And Skulker showing up and learning that Plasmius contacted him made me anxious. I figured something like that was going to happen but the tension is cranking up since I predict an upcoming confrontation with Plasmius.

I'm glad I got to read this chapter, because your portrayal of Danny is as spot on as it'll ever be. He'll need a lotta time before he's ready to move forward with his life.

This is such a refreshing story. Its so bizarrely different than the usual fanfictions I read but at the same time it feels so plausible in a way. They way you wrote and developed these characters feels so organic and im so glad that people are keeping the Danny Phantom fanfictions alive. Keep up the good work.