Oh my god this was everything. Thank you for making me cackle at the end with Malrene planting the spider—absolute peak comedy!

Cute and funny

Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #7

Examiner: Angel

Grade: 18.5/20 - EE (Exceeds Expectations)

Feedback: "I found your fic very humorous. I like how human everyone is, if you get what I mean lol I think their personalities shone throughout the fic, even the more minor characters in canon like Marlene. I will point out, though, that Lily didn't feel exactly like Lily to me. She was realistic enough, but I felt like she was more of an OC with some of the Lily qualities. Doesn't mean she wasn't a great addition to the story. All in all, a pretty solid and amusing piece :) The interactions were natural enough to be imagined in my mind, and the way they bounced off one another was cool. Even with the way Lily felt to me, the responses and dialogue bounced off another another in a realistic way as dialogue to me :) I don't think I've read a modern!au like yours, and you made it set out from the others. Well done! The flow was pretty smooth, though the scene changes were rocked it a bit with how many there were. Regardless of that, it was still pretty good, even with the messages from Lily and Marlene. You completed the task, and the prompt is used well enough for the story. I could see the three day differences in the scenes you provided in the fic. The details you gave were enough to keep the story woven strongly, despite the slight personality shift to me. I don't think it was rushed, and it felt complete once I reached the end of the story. It was cute, and I believe that Jily fans would like the humor and fluff all over no matter what. I didn't spot any SPaG errors that would take away from the story as a whole. You're within the word count limit, and the necessary information was in the note you provided. It's good work, Sarah. Keep it up!"

Adorable omg I would do that to one of my friends

lmao i got confused because i checked the reviews and i thought i remembered telling you this was awesome. and then i realised i’d beta’d it and not reviewed.
so.
i still love this.
(love you more)

Lol. Cute and funny