| Reviews for Egoistic |
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   Mari Wollsch chapter 15 . 7/24 super, please update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
| loulloko chapter 15 . 7/22 Hm I would like if you could get closer to Canon quicker but oh well, also I have a feeling that you enjoy hoIV for some reason |
| reptoholic chapter 15 . 7/21 I have to say it... you are going with the rout that he is millions of years old and he had advanced technology when humans were like apes yet he only cares about one country on a backwater planet... he could have crated a freaking Galactic empire by now or increased his holding so he is not so vulnerable. I have loved yours stories and up until this one I have not had much of a negative comment, but this is just kind of off... I wonder why he did not just appears later on closer to the time limit if you were not going to have him planet size or create an empire. Technically he has just been manipulating earth for around a millennia... he could at least be getting power from domains like a divine being... Story has great potential I would just suggest widening your gaze and range... |
| reptoholic chapter 14 . 7/21 potential |
| reptoholic chapter 13 . 7/21 TY |
| reptoholic chapter 12 . 7/21 ..GJ |
| reptoholic chapter 11 . 7/21 keep ot up |
| reptoholic chapter 10 . 7/21 ... |
| reptoholic chapter 9 . 7/21 hehehe... please do not lead this to him helping the nazis or hydra... |
| reptoholic chapter 8 . 7/21 sounds good.. mutants? Inhumans? Other Species? |
| reptoholic chapter 7 . 7/21 interesting... hope he keeps them under his thumb in the upcoming years |
| reptoholic chapter 6 . 7/21 Please don't have the empire destroyed by canon, that is one of the great things about fanfiction...changing things... I love him having a empire he can call upon |
| reptoholic chapter 5 . 7/21 has potential! Hope he makes immortal allies |
| reptoholic chapter 4 . 7/21 interesting. I do hope he is still getting stronger, with earth being a central figure his brain is in peril. While not spread himself to other planets... please please please pick an appropriate girl/girls for him |
| reptoholic chapter 3 . 7/21 wowza |
