Good fic

As the other ones, wonderful!

Soo sooooo lovely! I love the glimpse after they’ve been together for a moment. That is the best stuff and you capture them so perfectly. I can’t wait to read the rest of your work on here! So powerful and elegant and sexy

Ahhhh yesssssss so hawt and lucifer is so sexy loved this gurl

Yay, I see that you added this to the series!

You sure know how to deliver bite-sized Deckerstar hotness, fluffiness, and cuteness all in one tasty treat! I know that it's not part of your lucky number series, but it's still a very good one.

Very clever how you started and ended with that memorable Lucifer quote from S1, it book ended this piece nicely. Chloe's internal monologue was delightful and intimate wherein you captured both of their growth towards love and shared passion with such few words. I'm always rather blown way by your characterization of Chloe, because she's not easy to write from the perspective of, but you sure nail it every time. You really seem to understand her, and of course, Lucifer as well, and it gives your stories this sense of "realness", if you will.

The ending was probably my favorite part (a close second was describing curly haired, sleeves rolled up, dark eyed Lucifer) because you tempered the lightness and the passion with love and fear. How Lucifer comforted Chloe by assuring her that they had time was beautifully reminiscent of those times when he was so gentle and loving with her on the show... my heart could barely take it! It spoke volumes of how far both have come, and it closed this story in a sweeter, softer, and ever so slightly melancholy way.

As a general question to you after reading so many of your amazing Lucifer stories, how is it that you can portray practically everything these characters are feeling with such few words? It must be a gift, honestly.