Reviews for RWBY: Land of Shadows
Guest chapter 2 . 7/24
Ok, don't even try to lie your way out of this, this IS and absolute crackfic. Sauron pulls minions and powers out of his ass that are straight up toxic levels of LotR lore-rape, characters become weaker to show of the all-so awsome Lord Mastermind "I got killed by a Hobbit" who somehow is now a god-thing that he wasn't even in cannon. Sauron alsow is OoC, why? He is a planer and trickster, not a walking apokalypse that destroys everything in its path like his master Melkor. If he realy would enter Remnant, he would stay in the Shadows like Osman and Salem, gathering power in the form of minions and information and not actual power (ironicaly, being evil made him less powerful). Above all things, Sauron wanted Order, Order that he would create and lead on top of everything and then try to get Morgoth somehow back to plan revenge on the Valar (Sauron was VERY loyal to Morgoth). Alsow did a Felbeast realy somehow rip its way into an Atlas Ship, basically a flying fortress? I do ask myself thou: what would happend if Ruby hit Sauron or one of his Minions with the Silver Eyes. After what you wrote here it is probably "Pfff, that didn't even blind me" but you could make something more interesting with them in this story and not just let the Medival Mary Sues handel everything... somehow they seem to be better at fighting Sauron than futuristic magical supersoldiers, battelmechs and massive flying gunplatforms.
DIOS de la Nada chapter 2 . 7/18
Let's get this straight:
1) Sauron's eternal spirit was not sent into the void, but was left in the world of the middle earth as a weakened spirit defeated three times and deprived of all power and authority.
2) The void or timeless void (the door of the night) is in simple words a prison or a plane apart from reality.
3) maia like Sauron cannot create life in any form (including valar)
4) RWBY characters would have no problem defeating that whole horde of orcs. And also pointing out point 3, they don't exist.
5) Is this a crackfic?
6) This story is like a Swiss cheese but with more holes than cheese.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16
Wait what... where did all these creatures and characters coming from? How did Sauron get orcs are they grimm orcs or their regular orcs and how did he breed them so quickly if he had zero to begin with? Where did that elf, human, and dwarf come from? What in the world is going on? How are these people finding their ways into Remnant a separate universe from Middle Earth and why are they entering? I could understand Sauron because he's a Maiar and the Nazgul a little bit but normal Middle Earth living beings? I don't understand what is going on.
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 2 . 7/14
Damn it was good to see Gandalf.

Awesome chapter and good to see an update.
sweeting chapter 2 . 7/14
It's DĂșnedain not DrĂședain
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14
I got to say quite interesting. I found the Rohan part a little weird because it's just a normal human but hopefully it doesn't get too out of place. I like the part of seeing Salem being afraid of Sauron I wonder where that will be going especially since he stole some of her powers so I guess she's going to be struggling to keep control of the Grimm now since Sauron has a even greater more powerful will being that he has been around since the dawn of time while Salem she was just a normal human. I hope to see this updated to where the story goes. I like the story so thanks for making it.
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 1 . 3/3
This was an awesome read. Hope you continue with this.
sweeting chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
So are we going to get a gravewalker like character, Maybe Celebrimbor sent on a redemption arc to drive Sauron back and make up for last time.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
I love the fact that you used the Games Workshop designs for the other Nazgul.
LogicalWriter chapter 1 . 4/24/2019
Sounds interesting. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
Mr.Green37 chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
When the Nazghul ride, certain death awaits those in their path.
Mrsauce906 chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
I really liked this first chapter. You built the scene really well and I can't wait for people like ruby or Ozpin reacting to this. I have to ask because I played more games than read the books, will talion from shadow of war still be in saurons control during all this or is he free? Talion is one of my favorite characters and I can think of plenty of ways to fit him in, but if not then that's fine because in already greatly enjoying this story. Keep it up.
Dragonheart51 chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
Ok, I wanna see more. This is cool.
RowboatGirlyMan chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
It's nice to see Sauron being more powerfull than Salem,I wonder if she's going to regain her senses now that part of her evil power is gone.

I can't wait to see another chapter.
Rogue-eL chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
I am just going to say this once. Fuck story is gold. Questions. Will there be the Balrogs, will there be dragons. Will the elves come into the land and will there be Ents. That is all thanks and have a great night/day.