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   cesarleo chapter 1 . 7/22 meh con las parejas lo leo por black ops Harry |
| stylo1 chapter 13 . 7/20 funny how legillimency didnt show draco as a death eater. ofc voldemort hid those memories, its only months/years of practice withe death eaters and commiting acts of terrorism its not like that aould leave a gap |
| stylo1 chapter 12 . 7/20 his wards trip waking him and still some schoolyard boys get the drop on him... |
| stylo1 chapter 10 . 7/20 oh so now he cant be retrailed? open assault in the wizengamot without repocussion? un-fucking-believable |
| stylo1 chapter 9 . 7/20 nog guilty till they find enough evidence to indict him again... so they can just trial him again and again till he is guilty? |
| stylo1 chapter 8 . 7/20 30 2 down 28 to go 1 down 15 to go fire to burn them all let none escape he killed 10 draco was on a broom, he killed those on a broom, draco is still alive. you cant even count? |
| stylo1 chapter 8 . 7/20 if everything about the covert group is classified and even now their names are hidden then madam longbottom and alice longbottom telling neville is treason, something harry would react to as such. ofc a potter showing up out of the blue is a big sign as can. the ministry are fools for letting these fighters to their own way without rehabilitation. a soldier is a soldier this does not change because someone said so. nice to see how you are setting harry up to be useless at the cup with his headache. nerfing for the win how is voldemort already back and his followers out? why the hell is the cup in brittan with a dark lord running around. stay tuned for more stupidity next chapter, or sentence |
| stylo1 chapter 7 . 7/20 what kind of soldier is creating a false trail while ppl are waiting for him because he is late... that is inviting ppl to come in and catch him |
| stylo1 chapter 6 . 7/20 using phoenix ashes as bruise salve... righttt your story is empty your plot hollow your english half assed. the idea was good albeit implausible but this story is just shity |
| stylo1 chapter 3 . 7/20 visiting the the grave of your misscarriage every week for 16 years is beyond fucked up. seems like his parents need counseling not harry. contact your parents as they will be your tutors for the next year. ahh this is the point where you nerf harry the super soldier so that he needs to attent hogwarts right? orders are orders even if they dont come from superiors, if they say go waste time in hogwarts then thst is what i will do |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 7/20 disarmed and unarmed are two different things, cant believe i have to say that. what kind of opperative makes an unbreakable vow like that? sirius knows about harry? some family friend |
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 7/20 diagon ally please godrics hollow harry got out and went to the adress given to him. stellar work there |
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 7/20 how are the death eaters still around when there is a black ops programe like this? all they have done for the world. nice and ambigious so you can brag without saying about what. yeah death eaters and voldemort in the wind, seems the programe was a bust |
| Luq707 chapter 14 . 7/5 Great story so far. Please update soon. |
| eragon5443 chapter 14 . 6/24 I enjoyed this story, however, you seem to have trouble with mixing He and She when referring to the same character. Look at the second to last paragraph for a reference. You seem to put paragraphs like that quite a bit. He She He or She He She in the paragraphs when you are talking about a specific character. I really did like this story so far and hope you continue it! Just trying to help your writing some! Have a good day! Eragon |
