| Reviews for abstain |
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Natters chapter 1 . 1/5 Good fic |
Patougv chapter 1 . 6/7/2019 666 words, it's way too short! However, your writing is amazing. Are you going to do something similar until season 5 (would be a lot more than 28...). |
Jade chapter 1 . 4/20/2019 Oh dayum this was hotttt you have GOT to do more like this was so good but so short! |
Devil'sMiracle17 chapter 1 . 4/14/2019 Ah, I now understand what you meant by a 666 prompt. You meant anything relating to 666! I shall have a think, but you seem to be swarming with so many good ideas! I must admit, I'm gutted that you cut this saucy oneshot down by around 200 words, and that it was racier?! Talk about being a tease, hahaha. I hope you kept the original because you can always post it later as an "extension" piece, which I've seen other writers do, particularly because it'd be a shame to miss all that sexy. In any case, I'm very pleased and most excited to hear that you now have a goal to make 28 oneshots with 666 words, and I shall show my appreciation by reviewing to each. After all, you put in the effort to write them, and it's only polite for me to reciprocate. Do let me know if you tire of reading through them though! So, this oneshot was equal parts hot and funny, and completely something that I can see Deckerstar doing (especially now that they'll be on Netflix). I grinned at Lucifer's confidence at his ability to be patient, smiled when he swaps from calling her Detective to Chloe, and chuckled because of course they wanted to make the other crack instead of just waiting the 666 hours out! I really enjoy your writing style; the way you reveal information is indescribably lovely. You have also been holding out on us because you are quite adept at writing racy scenes in playful, classy, and totally hot ways, which I suspected when I read Curls (which I absolutely adored!). I hope that we see more of that, either as part of this series, or outside of them. You can't deprive Lucifer fans of devilish scenes! Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed this light, playful, sexy little number. As per your usual fashion, your characterization was on point through dialogue, behavior, actions, descriptions, and overall plot. Job well done. |
Diana chapter 1 . 4/13/2019 Cute. Thanks for posting. |
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 4/13/2019 hahaha I loved this just made me laugh so much just hahahaha |
whYFeL chapter 1 . 4/13/2019 What a nice, tall glass of hotness. I thank your challenger for the idea, and you for this answer. (Grins) |