Reviews for Stranded
Jules chapter 25 . 6/21
Sorry to hear about your laptop, a writer’s worse nightmare. Thank you for putting in the time to bring us this wonderful story. The chicken scene was so funny! Also can’t wait for this dinner and all it’s funny awkwardness I’m sure!
TimelessBadger chapter 25 . 6/13
Oh, thank you for this wonderful update! I could not stop laughing between the chicken and Mrs Poe. I love that, "where do you think meat comes from"... I can't wait to see Wyatt and Lucy maneuver their way through this issue. And I'm sure Rufus will be VERY helpful. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us. Take care!
Once Upon a Whim chapter 25 . 6/11
Oh jeez, poor Lucy. Wyatt's doing a complete 180 from meltdown to practically wooing her, and she's fighting so damn hard to not fall (further) for him.

Lol though, she doesn't realize what people are thinking. Though as soon as you said Wyatt told someone that she wasn't feeling well that morning, I knew where that would go. And yay for me not being the only one anymore that has tackled the issue of Lucy's time travel/reproductive/menstrual issues, lol. But that's going to take a lot of 'splaining when she/Wyatt finally realize what Poe there is thinking... I'm here for it!
Gracielinn chapter 25 . 6/11
Girl, I actually winced when I read about your computer problems (every author’s worst nightmare) :/

Therefore, I appreciate the extra work it took to bring fans of this story a new chapter :) Between Wyatt’s jerk behavior earlier and her own insecurities, Lucy is so uneasy about her “husband’s” seemingly out of nowhere change of heart toward her, I can hardly wait for the payoff to this slow build :)

And just thinking about feminine hygiene in the 18th century makes me shudder...
Nina chapter 24 . 5/18
Hey, so I read your A/N on chp 23. I apologise if my comment came off as nasty, it wasn't intended that way. I really love your stories, esp "Torrent" and "Once upon a Highway".
I'm a fan of your writing and love what you've written in this story, but in my review I was only hoping to give a constructive criticism since I felt Rufus in the beginning came off annoying here which was slightly off putting but I understand how my wordings would have come off has nasty and I'm sorry you had to read that on your daughter's b'day.
I'm not a bully, definitely don't want to bully you to discontinue your work and I don't have an account here because its pretty distracting to me to have an account and favourite stories,receive alerts, so I come here once a month when I'm free and me being a guest viewer has nothing to do with bullying and I always leave reviews though they are named as guest.
I hope this clears the misunderstanding and the fact that your fans love your work and don't want you to feel discouraged to write.

Yours Sincerely
Nina
TheBeat57 chapter 24 . 5/18
A great chapter...Rufus builds a heater, Wyatt cooks n Lucy needs someone to cuddle up to!
Once Upon a Whim chapter 24 . 5/19
Oh, Lucy. 18th century expectations? A big one of those is makin' babies. Don't forget about that one while you're snuggled up in bed with Wyatt. Especially given that he's likely stuck on the notion that you're going commando 24/7. Including when snuggled up to him.

I need some meddling from the actual 18th century folk to force some more husband/wife roleplaying, and thus actual feelings coming to the surface!
Jules chapter 24 . 5/16
Yay! Loved this update and also love the research notes you put at the end!
Guest chapter 24 . 5/15
This was exactly what I needed after a truly terrible week. I love your writing and characterization. Coming from a family of handy folk, I'll have to look up the Dutch tub. It was so nice to escape into your work for a few minutes.
TimelessBadger chapter 24 . 5/16
Wow your writing is such a gift! Loved the 'history' lesson for Rufus regarding undergarments in the 18th century. I would love to actually see Rufus in the petticoat...lol! Can't wait to see where their relationship goes. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe!
Gracielinn chapter 24 . 5/15
So happy to see a new chapter today but then you had to go stomping on my heart with Lucy’s introspection scene :/ Poor thing...Sorry, Wyatt, but it’s gonna take more than baked rabbit and a little platonic cuddling to repair the damage your thoughtless (selfish) words inflicted on your friend/fake wife :( Another great chapter, really looking forward to the next one—thanks! :)
Cerruleannight chapter 23 . 5/12
Love the new chapter! I continue to be impressed by your research and how you work it into the story. Thanks for sharing your wonderfully crafted story- can’t wait to see how Lucy likes her present!
Once Upon a Whim chapter 23 . 5/1
It's funny - you've got him at least admitting that he's feeling guilty, he cares, he respects her, he wants to make it up to her, he shouldn't treat her like that, she matters, she deserves more from him, he needs her - but both you/he very carefully still don't admit/realize WHY all of the above is true. He's still just not getting that he feels that way because he HAS moved on, and is in love with her. Come on, Wyatt - you're so close, just admit it! Even when he was disappointed to not be actually married to her, he's still being obtuse about why he's so bummed. You're not upset that you don't deserve her being that nice you you, doofus, you're upset because you WANT to be married to her because you LOVE her. (And she loves you back, which is why she's doing a hell of a lot more than Jessica ever did.) Idiot. He loves her to the point of inventing a washing machine (or at least making Rufus do it) - how many guys, husbands or not, go to those lengths?

Hopefully the next chapter is coming super quick, because I'm hoping Lucy's POV gets a turn soon. And, of course, I hope they both admit to feelings soon too :P
Jules chapter 23 . 4/28
Just want to say this story is a bright spot in my day when I see an update/read it! Hope you and your family continue to stay safe and well in these crazy times.
Guest chapter 23 . 4/28
I like this story. I find it annoying that some finds your writing annoy. If they have nothing nice to say, they should, as my momma always told me, say nothing at BB all.

Thank you for continuing.
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