| Reviews for Archangel |
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inuyasha16451 chapter 4 . 7/9 Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17 Two times you screwed Harry over (at least) by making him a Lesbian Fucking DICKGIRL instead of just leaving well enough alone and not polluting the internet with this trash.. At that's just from looking at the summary. |
candinaru25 chapter 4 . 12/23/2019 very interresting |
Have a Little Feith chapter 3 . 9/21/2019 Reading this next chapter, I'm certain of it, "Mikado's" first name is Ryoko, not Mikado. She's from To Love-Ru, right? They just tend to call her "Mikado-Sensei", right? In Japan, it's family name first, and most people get called by their family names, unless there are multiple people in the room, in which case they get called by their full name. Also, some anime localizations don't reverse the name in English, so you might have been confused by that. Anime makes things confusing sometimes. Anyways, Mikado Ryoko's married name would be "Hazama Ryoko", not "Mikado Hazama". |
Have a Little Feith chapter 2 . 9/21/2019 I'll be completely honest, Mikado doesn't sound like a woman's name. Ryoko, on the other hand, certainly IS a woman's name. |
Thorn Samurai chapter 3 . 9/16/2019 very interested in what happens next |
Bigrob1945 chapter 3 . 9/7/2019 good chapter looking forward to the next one |
Hikari Nova chapter 3 . 9/7/2019 grammar needs work but interesting even if I think you went overboard with the inheritance test listing |
StrongGuy159 chapter 3 . 9/7/2019 Cool 3 chapters continue please. |
Black Dragon of Celestial God chapter 3 . 9/7/2019 Great chapter |
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 8/8/2019 interesting though you might want to be careful as this chapter comes off as being semi-crack |
StrongGuy159 chapter 2 . 8/7/2019 Cool 2 chapters continue please. |
Dominus1389 chapter 2 . 7/17/2019 Hmmmm it would be good to have Daphne,Tracey and Pansy as wives runing from England and war bettwen Light and Dark right into her clutches mby add Saeko Busujima also she is hot and good swordsman mby as Japanese Pureblood family she would fit also as Head Wife |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/5/2019 Look, I hope that she is a trans woman because if not... then I'm going to consider that you just made a female character with a dick because you thought it was HOT! I hope it doesn't end like another story of "she have a dick so now every girl that she meets wants to spread their legs to her" because I hate when people writes a story where every female worships the girl with a dick and she gets everything she wants, a mockery of what a trans women would deal in real life, let's not forget the insinuation with religion in the middle. I'm going to give one last chance to this story, if it ends like one of those mentioned then you lost a reader. |
Azure Darkness Yugi chapter 2 . 7/5/2019 Nice chapter. I liked the lemon scene. I have a few tips for you, only have one person talk for each paragraph. So to avoid confusion of who's talking. Also, have author's notes only at the beginning and end of each chapter. |