This was cute. The end was my favorite. To me it read like a kid bringing a puppy home, and asking 'can I keep it?' 10/10 would read again

Nice story.

More than one shot seems the beginning of something sjsjjsjs

Lovely chap...is it an os or multi chaps story! It's so pls update other chaps as soon as you can.

Hey author, how can I pay you back for making me smile so wide tonight? Your fanfic had me feeling all warm and fuzzy and I cannot put into enough words as to how much I enjoyed and loved reading it!

Nice! Love this story! :D There's more right?

awa why this OS have to be short it was so cool to read. need other part of the story. like the meeting between Luffy and the other boys! I really liked the marine luffy, even if he was forced to he didn't change his behavior and is still true to himself. I always wondered if Garp didn't introduce the boys how would they end up. and luffy being a marine at a young age is totally something Garp would do, like I don't know if you think the same but Garp is an ass. he threw 2 kids at mountains bandit for them to be raised and abused them wherever he visit them. and I always wondered why he didn't just threw them in a marine base.

can't wait to see how this will go. I love your stories their so awesome!