It was fun but not too much to say

Well i probably ship Cross nine and Pastrybee.

Good chapter otherwise

I think i probably shiping Yusaku and Arisu. I like the dynamic that she is boosy while Yusaku is the kinda serious person that lacks social skills to actually talking to a person, so dealing with a person like arisu can be quite dificult and more now that their personality can conflict with each other. And i can see that as struggle for him to actually overcome for his character.

Probably that can be a interesting idea if you want to explode that.

Probably i overthinking about pastrybee character a little. But seen how she react, i think that she have Gender Dysphoria and use that avatar, not only for fun but be who truly is.

Thought i not the best one to talk about it, you should probably investigate better if you gonna go in trans issue about Pastrybee.

Cool looking monster. And we see part of her past, cool detail

Rosebud vs specter

So that’s the end to the cliffhanger from last time, am curious Rass lost so how did he appear to Playmaker afterwards and where did Sparrow go?

Also from the way it sounded Sigrun and Solarflare both survived their duel? Hope to see more from Sigrun now that she has a cyberse.

It’s made known Rose’s AI is a PITHOS whatever it means, what does it stand for? Also it seems Bishop and Rook know a lot more about this too, seem to be using Rose like some lure.

Also when it’s stated the tower of Hanoi nearly complete it means it’s before its activated by Revolver in the sewers? At this point the Another incident is over?

Hope you can make it clearer too in terms of where the chapter takes place in the anime. Look forward to how you go about the other seasons.

I kinda felt bad for her. And it seems that every Photon duelist always are kinda have some revenge or angry personality

Nice to see the other chess pieces get involved

Things sure are picking up with the different sides and factions, with Solarflare attacking hanoi it’s w onset he handy gotten the attention of the leaders yet like Dr Kogami or Revolver. Wonder what it means when Sigrun now has her own cyberse monster and the outcome of the duel now.

Wonder what Arisu’s Plan is now in this complicated situation.

Cool duel

I like this so far, it seems Arisu having multiples identity is fun in a certain way in the drama with her family and Compedium itself look like a fun group.

So Arisu's AI is connected with LUNAR, wonder what they'll do now.

Also nice to see Playmaker's faction work with Compendium, look forward to seeing how their relationship will go.

Look forward to seeing how it proceeds, at this point in the story is after the Another incident before the tower of Hanoi?

Is Siren still unconscious though or is she free now?

Wonder what will happen next.

Haven't seen much interaction with Yusaku and Arisu outside of Vrains, maybe that's a chance to explore on, maybe the 3 separate people could be Yusaku, Ai and Kusanagi who investigate her?

Solid duel though would have liked to see what happened with Playmaker and Rose before they logged out too-maybe stating to meet again later?

Also yeah interesting Pastrybee being a dude the whole time, that was something they could have done in Vrains indeed.

With the anime over look forward to seeing how you end it off and hopefully cover some plotholes.

It seems promising,i like the joke and seem a good fic to read. Also i like how she ended up the knight with that move.

That was certainly surprising, I'll admit that. Really liked how you wrote the Compendium members' backstories, both of which were quite surprising as well.