Great story. Please continue.

Can't wait for more!

Look, the concept is great! Unfortunately you seem to be downplaying everyone’s reaction to Luke, Leia and Ben going back to the past. They’re way too calm! Edit needs to be done.

Will there be a sequel?

Not bad all told but had to suspend disbelief on luke getting caught Leia would have been a better story choice probably would have made the relationship heal a good story with having to be saved by Anakin. because there is no way any one is going to sneak up on luke without yasalimari karrde even said that in heir to the empire much less as the grand master in the vong war. That and talzin was a useless addition yoda could have told them the bendu would have been more fun . Those criticisms aside I enjoyed it.

Oh my word that is a gorgeously glorious and awesomely incredible magnificent majestic finale to what has been one of the best star wars time travel back to the clone wars era and prevent the fall of the republic, Jedi and Anakin since reading will of the force by Carl zenskly.

Was utterly brilliant to see that all’s well that ends well as the future is saved and everybody lives. While Anakin is able to brilliantly and tenderly reconcile the past and present versions of his children into one whole memories wise without any problem. As well as allowing everyone to live happy ever after.

What's next for the deaged time traveling trio?

Good story. Wonder how much changes when they get back to their time line?

OMG! it's coming! great chapter ;)

Is it over? This was a nice story.

Things heating up now! Nice story!

Love it.

Their guesses and internal questions were too spot on. "Did the Force show his father the future and his descent into the dark side"

"was she carrying twins?" being the other.

How are they paying for things with New Republic Credits from the future?

The time travel thing itself doesn't feel very natural with the way it was decided/executed.

They'd be curious about what the cause was but not guessing the cause. You don't jump straight into an assumption like that.

Dooku was too overt in capturing Luke. Especially after Palpatine asked Anakin to keeping an ear out for a spy. You don't make a commotion outside of Padme's apartment without Anakin noticing it. Plus it just doesn't makes any sense for them to know where to find him. Let alone get the drop on him like that. He is Jedi Grand Master for a reason.

Overall while a nice enough idea. I feel that it is too rushed and sloppy as is. So as is, it needs editing, and some expansion here and there to smooth the kinks and polish it overall.

Continue please. And Don t make Anakin Fall please. Happy Ending.

can dooku be trusted no..
please continue