| Reviews for The Rude Familiar |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/20 Hasta ahora con lo que he leído, puedo decir que esta historia es putamente buena. |
 Cheshirek3t chapter 2 . 5/29 So, as i see that kaz and kirche can swear, i assume this is some kind of self imposed rule on luise Like when some people say frick instead of fuck I'm okay with that |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25 Ok, why the fuck can Kazuma say fuck, but not Louise? In the first chapter it was funny because you messed up a few times and kept it as normal. But the amount of "sugar" "cupcakes" etc this chapter is fucking ridiculous. It was funny for like half the chapter but now it's annoying. I'll pass on this. |
| David Gumazon1 chapter 7 . 4/11 This is great and I'm looking forward for more chapters. PLEASE DON'T ABANDONED IT!? |
| LoveGlutton chapter 7 . 3/31 Apparently the “sugar” thing is not natural... why do you have her do it... I’m not trying to be mean, I’m just curious |
| LoveGlutton chapter 2 . 3/31 Aaaah... it’s like he never left. Freaking Kazuma XD |
| Acqua OfThe Back chapter 7 . 3/19 Es bastante divertida la historia, espero seguir leyendo por un largo rato. |
| tylermech66 chapter 1 . 3/16 the censoring is absolutely obnoxious, especially if this is a fic that's rated M. Just dont have the characters swear if you can;t stand writing swearing (You're already having them swear too much for realism, some is expected, but as it is it seems to be all they're thinking/saying) |
| marhaenaldi123 chapter 7 . 3/7 wierd,but i like it,8/10! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/23 I like the idea of using 'sugar' instead of 'fuck'. It makes Louise special in my opinion. |
| Shoytahn chapter 2 . 2/20 All the baking ingredients make this story unreadable. |
| Shoytahn chapter 1 . 2/20 Nice premise. Only problem I have is with all the sugar. Has to be the most annoying euphemism I've read so far. Id rather they actually curse or not at all. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/14/2019 This is what I call quality content. I'm not really good at making comments, but I like this fanfiction a lot. And I'm kinds hoping Louise will learn more magic from Kazuma, like Lurk or Bind. |
| Eli Clark chapter 3 . 12/9/2019 The only thing is I don't like how Louise says sugar to dverything. It doesn't make any sense. I get its a 'curse' but its not a good one imo. |
| a crashclown chapter 7 . 12/3/2019 I don't know if I've said this before, in a previous chapter, but i'll say it anyway. Kazuma and Louise make great partners, romantically or platonic. Their interactions just bounce well off, each other. Also... The Ship Has Sailed... Make of that what you will. XD. |
