Noooo!

I reached the last chapter (T-T)

The intrigue!, the answer! The dramatic hero moment and the opposition

What will happen next?!

I hope there is another chapter, you never know with FnF

Update please

So how is this story going to approach supervillians? Are we counting their absolute best performances, (the extreme outliers) what about the times they got warfed really hard to make one character look dangerous? (Like the time in the animated movies superman destroyed an army of doomsday using only his heat vision.) Is an unpowered superhero going to be able to go toe to toe with a kryptonian just because they made sure to bring a couple of obvious (or in the case of Batman, sometimes ridiculous) aces in the hole that the kryptonian didn't get paranoid about when this base human confronts them? Will the heroes forget some of their major powers at the drop of a hat like the flash does so often because of plot convenience? So many questions without even asking which continuity we should check the most for character development

One dooms day fought superman to mutally assured destruction and now you have 4 more? Holee fucking shit!

How is she and owl going to get their powers even sod for that matter if yellow radiation kills them ?¿?

really good story

: we will destroy Krypton unless you pay us
*dramatic zoom*
1 million ooblecks!

Damn. Superman eat your heart out, your cousin is way more of a badass at age 8.

Totally digging this. Thanks!

i love this story, i saw it and i read it all today and i love it. keep it up.

meh,

the story is good, but it could be great if worded properly or something,
i feel like the mc doesn't use her/his knowledge from another life,

you feeling me?

also like,
MC's priority is all over the place,

the story also feels like a filler before the main plot(earth)

Kryptonian being purposely genetically engineered to not be able to leave their home world was a rather important thing to forget. Considering canon Kara was able to leave, her parent and uncle probably figured out a way to undo the genetic engineering. Though considering the effect red solar energy and certain other forms of energy have on them once they were able to process yellow solar light, it seems like a still incomplete solution.

Pointless angsting again, from the beginning of the story, then mom going into the coma from either the tiny bit of light that slipped past the bracelets or the sword healing her - misery for miseries' sake, there's no other reason. And now so many words for mental self-flagellation and self-harm for no end - there are better methods and approaches. It feels a lot like she's forced to ignore basic meta-knowledge and torture herself and then in this case this miraculously giving her the solution - it's unpleasant enough to read for me to prompt comment and the hope for a future where there is more enjoyment to be found.
I hope you break the streak, that it doesn't become a thing. It's a lot better to read stories that just don't go there, or better worded .

Very good, loved

Thanks for the update, i’m def gonna stock the wait out. and that doesn’t mean i think that your story’s bad, i’m just unfamiliar with a lot of what has been going on. keep up the good work and we’ll get to earth one day! lmao