This is beautiful fanfiction but I feel that you rush to the story at the end.

I would love to read about jasper thought about Bella pregnancy and about Bella success and Living with Edward.

Just a lovely story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Why does it suddenly feel like Patty is a government plant who's advocating for the CDC / WHO / the Gates Foundation and their bullshit vaccines by using the Twilight fandom's obsession with Edward Cullen as proxy?

WHY are your stories not published or made into movies? Break and Broken are two of the best stories I have read in years! You are very talented and I admire your writing! Thank you for these beautiful stories!

This conversation at the end about the world being eradicated by a disease was so hilarious to read right now. Maybe not the takeaway I was supposed to get from this chapter but as I sit, stuck in a lockdown, I just can’t help myself.

I have been reading all of your story's (I don't know how I have missed you before, each one gets better, you are amazing with your knowledge and variety of subjects, I don't know how to be in touch properly but just had to put the words out there to tell you how so entertaining you are, Thank you so much, lots of love. June.

I loved it. Good angsts!

Crying

Damn, fuck! This story has me going! Thank you

So sweet, awww he wants to give her his booster!

I finally finished this beautiful story! I’d been holding off getting to the end! I keep thinking of Edward and Emmett out there fighting against Covid-19! Perhaps that’s a potential idea for a future epi? I’m sure I’m not the first or last to make this suggestion, but this fic has given me an understanding of what might be happening out there now!
Thank you for your words and the escape they provide!
Megan

Okay. This was leagues better than Break -and Break was just a-ma-zing. I don't even understand how you accomplished that. I thought it would be a bit of a waste of time to read a history i already knew how it would end. But, damm, it was soo good. It felt way less angst than i anticipated as well. Even though Edward was struggling with the truth and then with a broken heart, it was so much more light hearted.

i THINK that's cause you put much more effort in describing how their relationship developed, u know? the daily moments were they would laugh, struggle and just flirt while falling head over heels in love with other. Those moments of building a relationship, those moments of everyday life, they made such a difference. Because u weren't so focused on Bella's healing - and therefore put more into showing them being with each other - it felt light. it felt natural u know? the piragua moments, for example, so cute, and not something that was displayed in Break.

in this one, it felt even more right that, even with many obstacles, they fell in love because they just clicked, u know?

and Emm was just priceless! i loved him in Break and even more in here. such an amazing character. and what can i say about Jay? loved him from the start. and, well, a story with such cute little toddlers always will be more fluffly, right? it just shows how little kids can shine with such joy and innocence. he was a sight for sore eyes and i am overjoyed that his mom, at the end, found the strength to fight and get better for him and for her.

i am also not saying this story wasn't angst - i cried A LOT. my heart did break sometimes. I have to say, though, that, even with Edward looking perfect on Break, in here we could see that he was not so much. Yes, yes, we could see that he had demons on Break. But in here? It was all open. It showed even more that he was imperfect. The way he handled Alice and his parents and possible love conquests throughout his life shows that. he wasn't broken just because he fell in love in an impossible situation with the woman his sister had broke. it was also because of his fucked family life.

I have to say i hated - and had a bit of simpathy - for Alice since Break. But in here? It escaleted. She was - not only, of course - a product of her upbringing. And that is awful. Every time she tries to reach for Edward, she gets more resentful and i think a reader can see it - and not him - because we are more emotionally detached from the situation. In this epilogue, when she bares her feelings in front of her brother, it's crystal clear she was, even unconsciously, trying to reach out for him and, maybe, trying to validate herself because he was the only one that stood by her. like i said, heartbreaking.

i loved how you showed us that. that she was not a villain. just another broken person with lots and lots and lots of problems and poison inside. but broken nonetheless.

i also loved that in here it was more clear that bella would need therapy throughout her life - something i had criticized on Break, sorry. Having depression, in my raw knowledge, just means you have to deal with good and bad and real shitty days. but u can deal with it. and be happy. as shown.

and i also loved the romance moments, because, well, i am just another hopeless romantic and i thrive on those scenes. and i love an happily ever after ending.

at last, i HAVE to say, seriously, that i am in LOVE with your writing, with the story you created and with the developments and the complexity and depth of every character. it was amazing. i was awed by everything. and everything was so well constructed that i don't even have words to compliment your work enough. than you. thank you. you made days and my isolation way better and happier.

ps: sorry for the length of the review, but i had to put into words

Hi there,
I just finished your amazing story and wanted to say thank your for taking the time writing and sharing it.
Taking this journey with Bella and Edward distracted me from this crazy corona-virus-time.
Greetings from germany,
leinchen

Great story! I loved the relationship between Edward and Bella but loathed loathed Alice, Jasper was a prat, Carlisle was awful and Esme was a door mat. But still sad it’s over. I definitely prefer it to the version written from Bella’s point of view.