NO OFFENCE
But I didn't like either character in this story.
Never been a fan of Ron Weasley and I've always hated how Harry continuously takes Ron's side even when he is being unfair. Mostly I don't like how Hermione always keeps giving them chances neither deserve.
Frankly I love Robin Ellacott more than Hermione.
Anyways I think Hermione should have finally come to terms with her crush on Harry. And Harry is the biggest dolt I've ever seen. I honestly wanted to jump into story and hit him for treating Hermione that way. And there should have been more explanation from Harry and Hermione at the end.
I loved the 2nd perspective and the line life isn't fairytale.

It makes me want to cry... You can just see it happening in real life.

I really liked it :) I've always loved 2nd person narratives, but, most of the time, they're not quite as good as yours. It was a really effective way to show us Hermione's thoughts about Harry and, as you've written, life isn't a fairytale!

I LOVED IT :D (and even cried a little? I thought it was really touching!)

Your style really confused me at first; was "that article" the one by Rita Skeeter, like I just realized, or was it an article of clothing or some random thing like that?

And it did kind of bug me that you said Ron had been cheating on her, because that so does not seem like him.

But overall I liked it...

Fantastic story! I've always loved 2nd person stories, and this is one of the best ones I've ever read. I was holding my breath the whole time, hoping everything would work out for them. Great job!

Wow! I felt her emotions and I empathized as the story progressed. I really liked the way you told the story. I'm glad it ended the way it did.

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I kind of found this story by accadent and am glad I did. I'm going to move on and look at some of your other stuff.

I just love this .

Your second person perspective writing skills are not so great. lol, I shouldn't be criticising you; my writing is infinitely worse.

I think I read this a long time ago, and I liked it then as much as I like it now. I don't know though, maybe something in the ending was missing for me. Not mushy romance, that would seem out of place here, but maybe I would have expected Harry to say that since Hermione always seemed to know him so well she ought to have known that too. I don't know, I just see it that way, but maybe it's just me that's weird. Anyway, I love all of your works (if you'd just update sooner, though!)

Pearl

This fiction is very true - life is not a fairy tale, and you've expressed this so bluntly and accurately that I sigh and admit to myself, "Yes, she is completely right."

Thanks for a good read. Every one needs a reminder at times that no, life is not a fairy tale. I hope this review doesn't sound TOO melancholy. :)

Excellent job. You did very well with this piece.

-C. Callispi

I must say that this has to be the only good story I have ever read in the 2nd person POV. You have such a great imagination that I feel like I should give up my thoughts of ever writing a story. (I only just made and account and I haven't posted anything yet)

I am currently going through your fics, and this is the third review for you I have written tonight. I hope you continue to write awesome fics, as I must say yours, so far, are the best!

This is really beautifull...sorry my english is not so good. But I have read some of your fics and I really like it.

I cannot put into words just how much I love this story. I think it is absolute brilliance. I was crying by the end of it.

It would be really neat to see what Harry's view was! Not your typical sort of fic, no, but very good all the same!

wonderful. i think all your stories are wonderful, this on is my favorite:: keep writing.