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   galexwilliamsongmail.com chapter 1 . 5/11 PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 Haphne is a strong secondary pairing for me. Though it’s a bit Alternate, it’s not very. A continuation would be welcome. TGM |
| naruto chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 great chapter keep it up |
| TaeSunWoo chapter 1 . 5/11/2019 This was lit. Wouldn’t mind it continuing lol |
| Tyler'sPrincess chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 I loved this one-shot. It would be fun to play with and develop. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2019 This was good. I hope you will continue it. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2019 Good scene. |
| Smutley Do-Wrong chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 Overall not bad. Might tone down the hostility(or trade some of it for incredulity or caution/paranoia) & prejudice, toward Slytherin. Maybe have Harry remember if not for Hagrid, Ron, and Malfoy, he'd been sorted to Slytherin. Poor cliché: "Fellow?" Harry questioned before it clicked in his head, "you're Slytherin?" was she fifth year Even if this cliché, due to following the herd, copying this idea. Any who THINK, should filter it out. Eg. Particularly for the Daphne build cliché, which has her being gorgeous. For random mixing, they'd share 1/3 of all classes. COUNT HOW FEW kids in each year, how few Slytherins. And a teen boy doesn't even know the name of a teen babe, he's been sharing SMALL classes with for over 3 years of school? "debt off his chest today " off his back(carry burden) might be better idiom(?) Or "off his mind". |
| Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 Cute |
| Slytherin Potter chapter 1 . 4/11/2019 Wonderful One-shot. If you somehow more added to this story it would be awesome. So I will be following this story for sure. |
| Mellowrino chapter 1 . 4/10/2019 Just a one shot? Shame, I liked this perspective of daphne, rather than your usual ‘ice queen’. Otherwise a cute little story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 I think this is one of the cutest one shots I've read in a while. Keep up the good work and maybe make a full fic out of this at some point? I'd love to see where it would go. |
| Urazz chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 Pretty good story, though it would be nice to see Harry ask her why she didn't try to be his friend earlier and it would be revealed that Ron and Hermione pretty much inadvertently act as a buffer to prevent people from getting close (Hermione being a bossy-know-it-all and Ron would prevent any Slytherins from befriending Harry). |
| Raymondjay41 chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 Too bad it’s a one-shot as this has potential to start a multi chapter story as it seems to come from a new point of view. |
| xCalavera chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 this one-shot has so much potential to be continued. I really did like your take on daphne |
