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Louie Pastiche chapter 8 . 7/17 Now, THIS is more like it! :-) I was hoping my wild guess would prove wrong. But, alas, no. What's even worse, though? A time machine in the hands of a retro-freak like TDC can bode no good for anybody! I hope chapter ten sees the miraculous escape of Little May. |
Louie Pastiche chapter 8 . 7/14 Oops! Looks like I spoke too soon. :-( |
Louie Pastiche chapter 7 . 7/14 Whew! Glad to see last night's gibberish was only a 24-hour cyber-bug. As to the context of the chapter, itself? Poor May! It sounds like Turner D. Century is up to his old (one might even say "anachronistic") tricks. Only, this time, with the dubious improvement of a Pym-particle beam! |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/14 Knocked out by giantess b.o. (lol). Classic! |
Carycomic chapter 1 . 7/13 Relax, folks! I'm sure the strange hieroglyphics of the newest chapter are merely a temporary hiccup, caused by my accidentally straining Ord's resources. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/13 Your software appears to have caught a cyber-version of COVID. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/4 WHOA! This was an unexpected development. Literary fireworks just in time for the 4th of July. Have a Happy (but safe) Independence Day, everyone! |
Louie Pastiche chapter 6 . 7/3 Not bad! A little rushed, perhaps. But, not bad. I just hope the next chapter resumes with shrunken Spidey! |
Louie Pastiche chapter 5 . 7/2 A new installment? At last! At last! And after only a month, too. A bit shorter than usual for one of your new postings. But, I enjoyed it. Part of what made the original X-FILES so good was the periodic conspiracy meetings between the various talking heads. Done just right, they can prolong the suspense, quite nicely! So, you can darn well bet I will be here for chapter six. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/19 Seems like a rollicking good time. ThankYou |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/14 ". . .Plains of Nazca." Lol! Priceless! |
Louie Pastiche chapter 4 . 6/13 WOW! So, you finally updated this. Nice job. It felt just like I was watching an episode of wWF:TOS. |
Louie Pastiche chapter 3 . 5/21 Hey! Happy Anniversary! I just noticed that it's been one year, to the day, since you posted this chapter. ;-) |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 Atlas vs. Garganta?! Ooooh! This is gonna be good. |
Harry2 chapter 3 . 5/21/2019 Nice job on this chapter. And we get to see some of our favorite characters in action in this universe. |