This has been by far the best full metal fic I've ever read.

Well that isn't how Pride works, he doesn't have a limit however carrying his shadows over long distances increase the chance oh I'm getting caught. So he tends to just transfer to a different container.

I would love to see you writes another fma story

Holy shit, you are a damn good writer. And the best part? You finish your fics! First time in years that I've read a complete story. Kudos!

This whole thing is like watching a train wreck and knowing you cannot do something to avoid it.

I'm so mad at myself for not reading this sooner but now that I finally did, it was such a treat dude completely amazing ur writing never dissapoints

What a delight this was to read! I was not expecting the series' villains to get a happy ending. Thank you for writing.

A completed story that actually deviates from canon? Colour me impressed. Was a satisfying read!

Fucking excellent. A ride from start to finish and a story I thoroughly enjoyed keeping up with. Best possible regards to the author.

Muy bien hecho .

That was amazing story and my favourite fma fanfic

Genial.

Wow I can't believe how different this story ended compared to canon and on one hand I'm sad that so many good characters met such an end, but on the other hand, I'm happy that Ellie and Selim are happy together.

This was such a wonderful read and I like how complex it was, even when it came to relationships. Ellie didn't just love every homunculus because they were the same as Selim, rather she judged them based on their behavior, or her preconceived notions, which was wonderful to read about. It was also fun to read about her being a family with several of the Homunculi since it goes against their obvious nature, but it felt so natural and real, that I enjoyed the moments between them.

Thank you for writing this story.

Finally a good FMA fic

i Love this Story. There are just too few that actually center around the homunculi. But I am going out of this with a few questions like what happened to the other homunculi like gluttony? What happened to Maes and Nina after the promised day? And what did Father see in Ellie‘s old soul? Because in he seemed recognize her after he met her for the first time.