You are off on a great start, I hope you will continue writing for this fic. Thanks for what you have written so far :)

oh a very interesting world you’re making in this one, im curious about the hybrids very nice! and Ooh she is already thinking about him without knowing hehe girly you’re fallin and dont know it but i bet he hasnt atop thinking about you hehe.. well of course it’s probably more along the lines of death but thats minor details lol

I’m soooooo happy you created this prequel! I love the interactions between these two and can’t wait for their next meeting.

Nice little expositional chapter, calm and breaks up the action. Down time is good. And yay some new people to meet! See you on the next one. Mwah!

I love this. I really like Revna - somehow I can hear the Xeno in her snarky commentary, which is great because often hybrid oc's end up being more like humans with black hair and claws.

Ok...i like Cesar. He reminds me of the hybrid from Ripley aliens . And I think Big blue has competition.

interesting to read as always

Speaking of squeezable rumps what do you think a Yautja's butt feels like? I think its feels like a contradictions it look hard and tone but when you grab and nice hand full it, it's all firm yet squishable! haha

ok to the review a wonderful chapter though home girl got beat up like a rag doll poor thing but at least he gave her a "i'll kill you next time" gift so thoughtful of him!

also I love your word choices, I just came from read a serious Harry Potter fanfic and then I came here and you use the words: whack-a-doodle and Fish doo-doo I love it i really do

I cant wait to read the next chapter i really enjoy your story keep up the awsome work

rather exciting and fun to read :)

There was so much water i was holding my breath! Rhis is just like jason and the argonauts! But with giant fish! And Taal! And Yautja! Doing good with these action scenes bleu. Keep the cheese roll rolling! Do you think Revna and J.C would get along?! Haha! Sev might get Jealous! Fab chapter! Oh.. And pants?! I don't wear pants!

Aww he's kind of a sweet heart isn't he.

Man thong!

Aw yeah!

You sure as hell know your way with words... so many beautiful ones entomology wise.. so rich in meaning, they truly come alive!

I don't even have a favourite moment in this one! There were just sooo many times I squealed like a giddy schoolgirl and my cheeks started to burn with embarrassment! Haha! And our heroines witty self-talk/inner voice just floors me completely!

Whenever you describe Mr. Blue's "packagehis man tong) in my minds eye... I see this aboriginal look.

Fabulous!