It was good until you added the “venom” possession thing. I ended up just scrolling through the chapters quickly because of how uninteresting/boring it is.

Percy can deflect bullets and fight Titans. Arrows shouldn't be a problem. However, I'll chalk it down to Percy being distracted.

Zeus seems slightly out of character here... meh, good chapter otherwise, I've seen a few comments concerning chapters 10 and 13 that make me a little nervous. so far this seems pretty interesting, but I'm not sure what I'll think about those two chapters. we'll see.

I feel like most people aren’t realizing that when you say this is a dark Percy Jackson fanfiction, you don’t seem to be talking about the character, but rather the story itself. A dark PJO story, not a dark!Percy Jackson story. At least, that’s what it seems to be so far, and I hope that I’m right, as I’ll have to admit that I don’t think I’d be much of a fan of a dark, likely edgy Percy, but I could end up loving a darker take on a PJO story/crossover.

I liked the story before this possession shit. You had a good thing going and you ruined it. Dropped.

It wasn't bad just really confusing.

Nice work

Loved the story up till the possession now I'm dropping it was good but now it lost my interest

Wasn't venom supplies to be on the west coast and why did he head toward all this

No good deed goes unpunished.
Why did he assume the people running were innocent?
What was messing with his head and powers ?
Why didn't venom go after some else after being rejected for so long?
Surprised he said the soldier were just doing their job since you know they caused this and just following orders doesn't really fly in America.
Yeah I don't see what he did that makes him unworthy consist something was messing with his head and he's was being attacked by an army

Wonder what's next. Sucks that the updates are so slow.

Well this is a twist to things

dark is one thing, but you had better not make him evil. Also WTF is with the possession, I am guessing its something from the PIT. Oh well I will wait and see where you go with this.

Don't see how this makes Percy unworthy when he wasn't and isn't in control of his actions. Especially since your not responsible for what happens when someone else is controlling your mind or body.
A little surprised the bullets and fire hurt Percy.
Don't get why venom didnt go after an easier target after Percy rejected him
Even though Percy is always called stupid he has at least a stage intelligence,and he could have learned about pH in science class or tried to find information on things his powers could be used for

Percy should have been able to lift Mjolnir. He's more than worthy enough