SUPER CUUUUTE! I really wish me and my twin had a twin sense and were this close. XD I love your sibling fluff but it always makes me sad that GF is over and me and my twin, Cassidy, aren't as close LOL. Keep on writing and doing what you do!
PS: I kinda like it how Mr. Pines is the one that thinks Dipper is dead lol. My dad is always the one the one who overreacts out about stuff XD

Hello! recently stumbled upon your fan fiction. I like your description style, really. and I would love to translate your fanfic on another site. on . I want this fan fiction to see as many people as possible!

Aw it was so beautiful!

Found and safe at home at last! And the ending...ah, so much CUTENESS! Finally they are back together, and nothing would be more reassuring than to have a quick snooze snuggled together :3

Overall...WHAT AN AMAZING STORY! I LOVE IT! I liked the short chapter style and alternating between the perspectives of the main characters. You really captured emotion and tone with only a few words. I always wanted to know what is going to happen next, and you obviously did not disappoint! It's so good to see fluff and comfort between the twins after a long period of unease and fear of losing the other. It only seems right!

THANKS SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY! This is Dipper and Mabel bonding at its finest and most dramatic! I hope you'll write more of these angst/fear-turned-hugs/fluff tales in the future, one-shot or multiple chapters! :D

thank you for updating i love your stories! cant wait for next chapter (sorry if i was a little mean)

FINALLY REUNITED! *SQUEAL* :D

I would have liked to see more tears and hugs between the two, but these two did had a long afternoon...and I guess additional physical comfort can come later when both are secure back at home. I can never get enough seeing them hug or cuddle the life out of each other, especially after fearing they would lose each other yet again. :)

Really loved the short chapter style and the emotions in the few descriptive words. Can't wait for the next chapter that wraps this story.

I love this so far! So excited to keep reading more!

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME! I'M ABOUT TO CRY AND CRYING IS NOT FUN!

It's okay Mabel...I'm happy to see you here too...I'm going to be fine, now that you're with me...

I'm very confident that Dipper can still "hear" Mabel despite being knocked out. Their twin sense can never be truly cut...

Not sure if this might be a stretch, but maybe just the mere presence and comfort Mabel is providing by holding Dipper close to her actually gives him enough of a energy boost to return to consciousness and feel somewhat better? And perhaps Mabel gets a little sick (though not near the level of Dipper's) as well as she "transferred" some of her health into Dipper? Gosh there's only two chapters left and I'm still trying to find ways to churn out the emotional climax as long as possible...XD

Noooo why you so evil

Finally reunited...but alas, Dipper's ailments got the best of him (and at the nick of time to! What might happen had he collapsed before he spotted Mabel...). Hope he will be okay, Mabel has him now, so he should be fine, right? Right...?

I'm guessing that Dipper's only sense of what's going on in his unconscious state would be through his connection with Mabel...he can tell that Mabel is deeply upset and concerned over him...and while he can't see or move, he can feel her warmth and close presence...while he can't hear anyone else, he can still make out all of Mabel's sobs and cries...

why you must do this to me? I'm literally crying

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!? *makes ugly sobs*

OH GOD! POOR DIPPER!

Nooooo you r too evil