An excellent chapter, loved the scene with Genma. For all he's done he does care for Ranma.

It's possible Ukyou's father was so insistant because his skills weren't good enough to train her as he felt she should be trained, and not simply greed as in the future Ukyou was still allowed to practice her art and was not kicked from the family.

love this story maybe ranma could heal kimiko tendo with his ki or he and the crew could go to ryogenzawa and get the water of life or fight the orochi for the moss?

Well I feel bad for genma now haha. But it was necessary. Awesome story. Very unique and touch of reality also. Waiting for more. Keep it up and best of luck :)

I don't understand, how can people who don't have years of martial art experiences unlike ranma sense ki right out of the blue when it usually takes years of practice and effort to even sense the flow of ki. Kasumi who barely even practiced martial arts could sense ranma's ki and even produce it herself. Now a gymnastic team who probably never practiced as intensely as ranma learned it in a few hours.

Your explanation in your author's notes was most enlightening.

super, can't wait for next chapter! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Thank you for the chapter, it is nice to see Genma getting what he deserves and Ranma getting his mother back, a sane one to boot. Or, nearly so.

This is so good thanks for writing this story I'm glad I found it. I can't wait until you're able to write and post another chapter.

I've rather enjoyed this fic. About the only part that I was mixed on was the Amazon side of things.

O.k. I sort of can't wait for Ran and Ranma to meet.

I'm more disappointed in the Amazons. They never take the proper long view. They tend to be very short sighted. Ranma has a good bloodline, but he is also very emotionally damaged and isn't interested in running off to China. He is likely to have kids that should be much easier to have some one marry though.

I sort of hope that you have someone else knock out Shampoo. About the only one who really makes sense is Kuno.. Ranma hasn't even met the lost boy in this fic so he isn't an option.

So far, I want some more building blocks tying Kasumi with Ranma and Ukyo. That we can all share him and each other is likely the best idea ever.

Oddly, I could see several of the background girls like say that delivery girl being interested in arrangements. I was actually sort of irked that you didn't have Ranma spend a few hours teaching that girl how to do proper ki pockets.

It seems the government and military and everyone is interested in Ranma. One thing that you should have though is Ranma basically accidentally starting a cultural revival of ki martial arts in Japan.

I'd sort of wanted Ranma to collect a few of those treasures and store them away for Ran. You know something completely sidestepping the expected plotline.

I can't wait until Cologne figures out that it isn't Ranma ability that is impressive. It's his effectiveness as a teacher. He is basically training up his own little group of Amazons.

I'd love to see Cologne be a proper mentor to Ranma without all the match making Elder crap going on. I can't wait for her to see their magic bike.

That was a very nice conclusion to Ranma’s family arc

Nice job on this chapter!

But Cologne's words worry me. IS the engagement to Shampoo going to occur, after all?

Huh. Genma took this better than expected.

You know Genma is a fool but the thing about a fool is that through a Journey they can become something more I hope Genma can grow from this kust like everyother character in this story. I wouldn't mind a interlude or 2 starring Genma

Hermosa historia en verdad no quisiera que muera la esposa de soun tendo

I think Ranma did it well even if it is advanced for his age he sound a lot like a child maybe older but a child none the less, he is like 10 to elven years old with bad language barrier. So he is clearly not 5 or six but a psychologist will probably take it as child who had to grow up in order to survive.

Ranma in the future had real troubles he was really mess up with his emotional age. Now he will have the opportunity to be more rounded adult when he get to it.