Reviews for Sunset Confessions |
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V. Sourweather chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 Thank you so, SO much for writing this for me! I thoroughly enjoyed this, from beginning to end! First, because Lily and Marlene were just adorable! Really, you showed us Marlene just the way I always envision her (hyper enthusiastic, when she is running towards the tree or jumping up and down from the excitement). And Lily's proposal! I thought I would die (no, not really) from the fluffiness of it! Plus, when she cut across Marlene's rant... That's why I love Lily! I also really liked the fact that their love was actually reciprocated and they had no idea it was. It really brings (well, for me, in any case) a perfect touch of reality. And the setting of the sunset... Thank you for using it so beautifully! I don't think you mentioned it more than once in the text, but it was enough for me to imagine all those colours and the landscape, because you have such a brilliant way with words! Thank you so much for writing this, once again! I didn't expect such a piece of fluffiness, but how glad I am that you wrote it. It was literally perfect! (And also, I really love the title you chose.) |
Chiara Polairix Edelstein chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 That so sweet~ I like it |
Herochick007 chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 I think it's cute Lily managed to beat Marlene to the statement. Yes, this was very fluffy, like a white poofy cloud! |