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Shadows and Lies chapter 10 . 11/7/2019 I know university must be difficult and all, but I just wanted to check up on ya. |
Andria Rainbolt chapter 10 . 9/24/2019 So much intrigue. I love it! please keep it up! |
CajunBear73 chapter 10 . 9/24/2019 Not doing too badly with Toothless as they make a home, Hiccup seems to be visited in his dreams by something which may be a part of his future... But for now, keep practicing with your weapons training...You're probably going to need it. CB73 |
The13thReaper chapter 10 . 9/24/2019 Glad to see you back this has to be one of my fav stories |
RicoRodriguez2018 chapter 10 . 9/24/2019 Not bad! |
Shadows and Lies chapter 9 . 9/22/2019 I don't think this chapter was short, and it's as great as always! Also, love the new cover! |
Andria Rainbolt chapter 9 . 8/3/2019 I love the depth of feeling in this chapter and can't wait to see what comes next! |
atomicsub927 chapter 9 . 8/2/2019 I sense a plot to become chief from Snotlout |
CajunBear73 chapter 9 . 8/2/2019 Hypocrisy, Vengeance and Dogma... The Former Sentiment for a Chief who believed he 'raised his Son' and whatever 'he did in raising his Son' was finally bearing 'Fruit'...as the Viking he always wanted. Instead of the Fishbone he always Scorned...Until Dragon Training. Also for a Shield Maiden who Felt something other than Scorn for the Fishbone and Jealousy for the Usurper of her Rightful Place as her Classes Top Student...As Guilt starts to eat at her Pride...While Wondering how the Runt of Berk was Besting the Best of her Generation... The Middle Sentiment...for a Chief and a Shield Maiden whose existences only go from Act to React, with no time taken to learn, understand, or alter perceptions to leave the Rut they Live by only seeing things in the 'Clarity of the Viking Way'... The Latter Sentiment...feeds directly from the Middle One...This Rut of a Life...gives no Room for seeing a Future coming that will either cast 'The Viking Way' into the Sea...or Crush It... Perceptions of what was and what Hiccup was becoming will remain a mystery as Berk will let the Runt fade into a past they'd rather forget...Something that was inevitable the way his life was going at Berk, anyway. A promised Slaughter of a Dragon...to 'Honor' someone, only a couple on Berk...Really Appreciated. The rest of Berk are nothing more than Sheep, led by the Sentiments described above. And a Chief who sees things the way he wants them to be seen. CB73 |
Stein The Tenth chapter 8 . 7/8/2019 Nice. |
Gigabyte2598 chapter 8 . 7/4/2019 Love the story please keep updating. It's very well written and the story flows really well. Keep it up :) |
CajunBear73 chapter 8 . 7/3/2019 Mutually exclusive 'details'...that make no sense when considered by those who see things from the perspective of people who aren't aware...that a friendly dragon was involved in Hiccup's exodus from Berk. Astrid, for now, is the only person looking at the scenario she came upon with skepticism, but she too only sees things from what she 'knows' from her upbringing as a dragon fighter in training...Viking and misses something that will be so obvious when an alternative to Viking indoctrination and dogma turns it all on its head... So...none of what really happened is considered...making the Useless Runt of Berk's disappearance a mystery to some, and a blessing to most of the rest of Berk... Can't wait for when the 'dead' return from the dead, riding a Night Fury... And maybe, it'll be...a 'New Hiccup', too. CB73 |
Mariah chapter 8 . 7/3/2019 wow and since hiccup found a new home will he find a new woman? |
the-darker-side-of-things chapter 8 . 7/3/2019 :D thx for the update! |
RicoRodriguez2018 chapter 8 . 7/3/2019 Oooer... But I hope you get well soon! :) |