| Reviews for GoT: The Lost Clan |
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ATP chapter 2 . 3/22 interesting - but why help prey ? |
1stSFOD-Zombie chapter 2 . 2/24 Good read, interested to see how this changes things. |
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 2 . 6/23/2019 The Yautja...allies of the Starks? Well...ok...I can see how their sense of honour might match. Still...I already pity the other lords. These warriors...and that's what they are in every sense of the word... are more than enough to take on anything the south can throw at them. Even a dragon is just an overgrown Xenomorph to them. Dangeros...yes...more dangerous than a Xeno Queen?...Maybe. Should make a great challenge in either case. If they still have their weapons, the ability to go invisible ...and if they still have their self-destruct mini-nukes for when they are defeated, then they are practically the definition of OP in a world like Westeros. (Seriously...who would want to defeat them if you get blown up by a nuke IF you win) Just where were they when Aegon conquered Westeros? Surely with them on the Starks side Aegon's dragons would not have been enough. Especially when your consider that their weapons have been built specifically to kill xenomorphs. Dragons breath fire...buy other than that they aren't much different. Oh well, I guess though the ages they have lost 'some' of their technology. (like the shoulder cannon perhaps) Even then they would be more more than a match for any southern soldier...maybe even on par with a white walker. Let us see where this will go. Keep up the good work! |
FanBoy01 chapter 2 . 4/15/2019 The chapters are too short. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/5/2019 I like it lets see where this will go |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/5/2019 more please |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/5/2019 nice |
FanBoy01 chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 The White Walkers suck. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 need more to make an opinion |
Perseus12 chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 Its a good start and I like it! |
Mandalore the Survivor chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 Hmm very interesting potential, few grammar errors but a good start though as you're giving the Yautja a more myserioyness about them. But still, I would like see maybe bit more that happens between the Starks and Yautja, see what kind of changes this race ends up bringing to the world of Westeros. Overall not bad, curious to see if the Yautja end up becoming very involved with the Old Gods, there is a strong similarity their own religion beliefs with that of the First Men and due to the advance technology there well, I can certainly see the Yautja are gonna be doing lot of scouting and changes with this Clan now having arrived during the Long Night. Other then that, try maybe add more spaces, don't let the sentences all cram up, don't be afraid to truly take some detail in surroundings. But most of all try not make the Yautja overly powerful, just what makes sense in this case. The White Walkers are bigger threat to the Yautja then one may assume, mostly in terms that Yautja due prefer warmer climates and they still run the risk of having their own being turned into Wights or the Night King himself doing something, there is large influence of magic that still needs be considered and there are certainly humans who are capable of facing down a Yautja and possibly winning. But overall, just something of that good balance that deals out issues. I wish ya luck and curious to see more how this Yautja Clan is gonna operate, till next time. PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR! |
Hadrian.Caeser chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 A great Start |