Reviews for Comforting a Valkyrie |
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![]() ![]() While I do like a nice closed finished ending I’m not mad at this one. Astrid helping Snot? Never thought I’d see that day come. Stoick being classic Stoick as well lol. Thank you for writing these chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's Ragnarok! Snotlout finally learns to start being a gentleman and maybe won't die alone as the last of his family... Toothless is free of Viggo's and Ryker's clutches... Heather got served... And Hiccup and Astrid someday will be more than boyfriend/girlfriend...Sooner if Stoick doesn't stop nagging Hiccup to marry... CB73 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope this doesn't backfire on Hiccup, Toothless or Astrid. CB73 |
![]() ![]() I love this! I can’t wait to see how this finishes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiccup did smell a rat... And now Toothless is going to have to wait a bit before Astrid can give him dating tips for Stormfly. At least someone's going to get further with dating prospects than Snotlout. CB73 |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now the Grim brothers...are going to mess up some friends of Hiccup's... Hope they can overcome this. CB73 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Toothless may be in over his head...but that won't stop him from trying... Astrid, you may have your work cut out for you. Snotlout's going to be tough to train, Toothless might quite smitten and that may save him with Stormfly... CB73 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao! the conversation with Snot lout is hilarious. Were they pretending or are they actually a couple now? and what's the time difference between the previous chapter and this one? I feel like I missed some events. Loved it tho! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww...that's cute! I love how he just decides to drink with her on duty...lol. It's great so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited for the next chapter. This one was really good, and Snotlout is a discriminating pig. I've decided. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was good, made me laugh a lot! Snotlout will need to be good if he wants to learn... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your grammar is great, your style is brilliant, but your punctuation is a little flawed. Other than that, great story; hope to see more. |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Poor snotlout doesnt have a clue. Fun to see heather again. Cant wait to learn what happened there! Or what may go down is astrid walks in. Looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully Snot can learn rather than continue down the lonely road he's on right now...LOL! But interesting times at the bar...Hiccup's ex and her current beau are present and I'm sure Heather will do her best to mock Hiccup's 'loss' and Eret's 'gain'... Not if Astrid has anything to say about that. CB73 |
![]() ![]() Good story, please keep going. |