| Reviews for White Rabbit |
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Sage Nameless chapter 7 . 7/17 Soo... no GhostKitten? :( Also, please please PLEASE make Polty start dating Miles (presumably Morales). Imagine a boyfriend-girlfriend super-team that's literally one superhero. |
Slaggedfire chapter 1 . 4/26 I'm not quite sure I enjoy MC's being too dumb to live. Lives in a house full of people researching her "I'm gonna look up stuff on the computer and think no one will find out". Keeping a notebook? That's so dumb you should win an award! How is this person gonna be a hero? Deadpool is allowed to be dumb as a brick because he's immortal. |
thatfanboi chapter 6 . 1/15 This has been great so far keep it up |
006Sam chapter 6 . 11/19/2019 love it, very original. |
Akira D. Ryusuke chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 Dang, this story is good! I mean, I’m always a slut for symbionts, but the way you write white rabbit, how symbionte and human interact... it’s simply amazing! Okay, so, for the easter eggs and my reactions to them: “and a woman with natural platinum-blonde hair” kitty kat? “three men had an older fellow with dark-tinted glasses at gunpoint.” Must be matt “red and gold” I’m guessing... iron man? (I’m still not sure on that one) “he took off his mask.” What? Like, wow, dang! I mean, for spidey, this is BIG. Like, capital letters, in bold, big. I mean, damm. I know he can be a little reckless at times with his identity, but like, that’s his capital Trust you got there, bud. “Is it me, or do his maneuvers become riskier every time we're around? It's almost as if-“ Oh. Ooooh! Oh, now I get it! It’s more than his trust what you have, isn’t it~ Spidey’s showing off~ All in all, this story’s amazing. Great job, seriously! You rock~ |
Ethloc chapter 5 . 7/1/2019 I rarely write reviews, but I have to say I love your story so far. keep up the good work. |
xXAnonymous01Xx chapter 4 . 6/9/2019 This is an outrage! How dare you leave that -spectacular- cliffhanger! I need moreee! I really really really love this. I hope you write more and -hopefully - update soon. ~ Subscribed Have a wonderful day! |
Rokai666 chapter 4 . 5/16/2019 Wow this is really good. I'm liking this fanfic a lot. Your writing and grammar is great. At least not bad because I'm not that good a editing; mainly because I prefer not to worry about grammar unless is is noticeably bad when I want to enjoy my reading. That said, this is a very interesting fiction. You've got me on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter. Especially with what you just said at the end of this chapter. I cannot imagine how having ghost giving birth at this time to be incredibly convenient to Claire. I hope the next chapter comes out soon! |
ar111 chapter 3 . 4/24/2019 ooh interesting! i dont like that bitchy mum and forcing ppl stuff, plz beat them all up, and flip the bird lol. update soon |
emiya-excalibur chapter 2 . 3/31/2019 You have my interest. Like what I see so far. Keep it up. |
NecrorexSparda Juubi-No-Kishin chapter 2 . 3/30/2019 Hey are the wing-class like the pair Nero has in devil may cry 5? |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/30/2019 More please |