Una linda historia me gustó tenía de todo muy completa te felicito soy una fanática de esta pareja y leo casi todo lo de ellos y en las historias que le realizan con ellos pero la tuya fue muuuuy buena ojala sigas escribiendo estaré esperando tus historias Saludos

I stumbled onto these two stories and absolutely couldn’t stop reading! I am hoping you are close to posting the third in this series! I’m putting you on alert so I will be notified! Thanks so much for sharing!

Great story! Or, actually, stories. For myself, I know that I'm reading something good when I can't convince myself to close the computer and go to bed ("Just one more chapter, then I'll go!"). This was one of those times! A third one would be most welcomed by me. I would love to learn more about the security aspects.

Lars' reaction didn't surprise me at all. in fact, it seemed perfectly in character. The vast majority of people who belong to the dominant culture swallow whole the myth that their perspective is universal. He is white and male. And wherever and with whom he grew up gave him to believe that people can be property. Makes me very curious about his past.

My daughter has a dissociative disorder. It's different from how you wrote Bella's but it's terrifying when it happens. So if you get/got crap for writing this, ignore it. It's real.

No disappointment. Just good to know how it had worked.

Don't have any theories but we do the same to animals that we believe we own. If that is the intent, it's disgusting.

So, you should know that this first chapter has prompted me to look up and read about three things that are new to me: the poem that is the title of the story (not a literature person, so though I know who Dylan Thomas is, I don't know much about his work), Bainbridge Island, and the alstroemeria - the Peruvian lilies. I love learning as I read!

Thank you so much for returning to these characters and letting us see how Bella adjusted to her “after” life. It truly is appreciated

Hey
Just finished speed reading another delightful tale. What a ride!
And yes sometimes there are grammatical errors but who cares, after all humans aren't perfect. It's like loving someone unconditionally, warts and all, lol. You are an amazing writer and your story ideas are phenomenal. Looking forward to part 3,
Thanks for a great read.
Margieann Bell

I loved your story. I didn't read the first installment of the series and I don't know if I can but I am looking forward to your next part for these two.

I think he was still thinking he had some control over her with the I love yous. She has been through therapy and Edward to know what love is and isn't.

Why is she has in that room by herself. Precious seconds could be lost if something happens.

Awww, I really liked this sequel especially this last chapter was so cute - dads and their daughters...

Somewhere in this story you‘ve said, you will write an outtake about their first night together...a lemon...can‘t wait reading ;-)

If she was that authoritative with the question just imagine when she finds out they suspected and didn't tell her.