Well your story has had a lot of work put into it. I respect you a lot more than every other writer.

rip another unfinished story

Love the story so far, I look forward to seeing more of it

New npc Grayfia,Akeno,Olga Discordia,Mirajane,Erza,

In my opinion i think that you should continue to add these jokes as long as it does not subtract to the story that you are trying to tell, and i think that you should continue to try and keep to the overlord format.

I loved it
Can’t wait for the next chaper

Nice!

Update soon

Awww I love the new awesome stuff, can't wait to learn how op and godlike those abilities are in the new world now that things like flavor text are real. (His godhood, fate weaver, immortal stuff, ect)

I think it is fun,you should continue doing that

I would like if you keep using sama and I really like the story even though there’s a bunch of gives me ideas on how Overlord could have been if there was ever a YGGDRASIL though the story just started I can’t imagine how the story’s going to be completely off the rails of canon I know it’s going to be one hell of a ride.I understand if you’re lazy I’m too alright but just plz don’t stop the going to reread it and talk more in-depth then just sayin it’s good I’ll do it let me just sleep it’s 1:00 am alright see ya and good work.

how about Master I have an idea for a overlord fic want to hear it

You’re welcome. Looks interesting still.

I like it. But there is a LOT of filler.

Looking good so far, you introduced quite a few new mechanics and I'm looking forward to seeing where you plan on going with them, hopefully you also change up the canon plot quite a bit.